Question

留意一下我们的周边，可以发现陪读现象蔚然成风。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文，内容应包括：

1．简要描述陪读现象；

2．分析父母陪读的原因(2至3个)；

3．发表你对此的看法。

注意：1. 短文必须写在指定区域。

      2. 词数100左右。

      3. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。

      4. 书写需清晰、工整。

Should our parents accompany us in studying at school?

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Answer

Should our parents accompany us in studying at school?

In recent years, many parents choose to accompany their children in studying, which has aroused a wide concern.

These parents are willing to leave their hometowns, even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus. Most of them, who consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids, rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children. Meanwhile, it can allow them to keep track of the kids' academic performance.

Nevertheless, what they've ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent, which will cause them not to develop the ability of self-control in the future.

Trust leads to independence. So it seems to me that parents should leave room for children's growth and study, in order to ensure their overall development.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是话题作文，提纲已给出，写作时可根据提纲分三段到四段来写：第一段简述现象；第二段分析原因，注意原因要给出2至3个；第三、四段指出自己的看法。注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了非限制性定语从句which has aroused a wide concern. 和which will cause them not to develop the ability of self-control in the future. 限制性定语从句who consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids.主语从句what they've ignored.表语从句that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent 和it seems that句型。so as to, keep track of, in order to等词汇及Meanwhile, Nevertheless, So 等连接词。

考点：考查提纲类写作。

【名师点睛】

书面表达写作步骤：

书面表达一般分为三个过程：思维、组织、表达。先是思维，审题想清要用的人称、时态及文章结构，把要写的东西在脑中 思考，要对所给材料进行组织，把这些思维作出整理，使其条理、系统化，但这还是较粗糙的，可能还有一些用词不当或语言错误；最后才是表达，把组织过的材料仔细推敲，确定无问题了再落笔成文。在撰写时要注意主谓一 致，时态呼应，用词贴切等。上述三个过程，最难的是第三个过程，需 要我们有较好的语法知识，掌握一定数量的句型，习惯用语，熟练的写作技巧，这样才能写 出通顺生动的文章来。总之，要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧。平时要多分析范文，多读多背诵，学会恰当地引用和培养自己的语感。