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假定你是李华,你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年,即将回国。现在由你给她...

假定你是李华,你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年,即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail,邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会,要点如下:

(1)祝贺她顺利通过考试,为她骄傲;(2)感谢她帮助你们学习英语;

(3)时间:星期六晚六点;(4)地点:阳光俱乐部(The Sun Club)302房间;

(5)路线:从她所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公车可直达。

注意:可适当添加细节以使行文连贯;词数100左右,开头和结尾已给,不计入总字数。参考词汇:欢送会 farewell party。

Dear Jane,

Congratulations on your passing all the exams. ________________________________________________

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                                             Yours, faithfully                                               Li Hua

 

Dear Jane, Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English. We’ll always remember the wonderful time we spent together. It’s a pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00 p.m.? We’ll have dinner together. By the way, you may take Bus No. 332 in front of your hotel, and it will take you directly to the club. I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead! Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【解析】 试题分析:本次作文要求李华的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年,即将回国。现在由李华给她发E-mail,邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会。要点包括:(1)祝贺她顺利通过考试,为她骄傲;(2)感谢她帮助你们学习英语;(3)时间:星期六晚六点;(4)地点:阳光俱乐部(The Sun Club)302房间;(5)路线:从她所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公车可直达。故既要完成任务,又要兼顾形式的要求。 写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了主语从句All you have gained,定语从句we spent together. delight, make great progress, appreciate, fulfillment等词汇,by the way 等连接词和It’s a pity that…, I wish…等句型。 考点:应用文写作。 【名师点睛】 应用文写作指导 应用文写作题目的设计形式多种多样,一般通过图画、表格、提纲等形式展示表达的话题及相关信息和主要内容,一般都要有一定的汉语提示和要求。写作内容大都包括对信息内容的客观描述,还要发表自己的观点和看法;有时要求提出解决问题的办法或建议。 应用文的写作要注意以下几个方面: 1、写作的前提是明确目的,以便合理的安排文章内容和结构。除了感谢信、道歉信、邀请信、推荐信、投诉信、求职信等目的较明确外,发言稿、通知、调查报告等也要考虑写作文章的用途或听众与读者的需求; 2、写作的关键是仔细审题,通过审题,得出图画、图表或提纲提示信息,并选准表达要点,使其很好的描述现象,分析问题,解决问题,达到写作的目的; 3、注意篇章结构的整体安排:开篇点题,表明写作的目的(一般给出);描述事物的顺序和思路(按照审题得出的表达要点合理安排,要符合客观实际和人们的认知规律);合适自然的结尾(首尾呼应,提出解决问题的方法或建议)。 4、注意应用文的语言要规范、准确,要得体;选词要丰富,适量使用结构稍复杂的长短句式,如倒装句、强调句和定语从句等,确保写作信息的含量;注意过度与衔接,确保行文连贯,提高写作的质量。 5、选择恰当的人称和时态:以第一、三人称为主,主要选用现在时态。  
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