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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school. After registered in the classroom, the volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates, two of which arrived later. I got to know my new roommate immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say “Goodbye” to my father, but he had to leave to my hometown in the evening. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently. Not until then I know my senior high school life had real begun.

 

1.walk改为 walked 2.registered改为 registering 3.the改为a 4.which改为 whom 5.roommate 改为roommates 6.去掉but 7.to改为for 8.me改为 myself 9.then 后加did 10.real改为really 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于记叙文,在读高中的第一天,父亲送我去上学。当父亲回家的时候,我意识到自己要独立生活了。 1.walk改为 walked考查时态。根据前半句It was on a warm autumn day可知本文叙述过去发生的事情,全文使用一般过去时。所以本句也应该使用过去式walked。 2.registered改为 registering 考查动名词。介词的后面通常要接名词或动名词做宾语,所以本句中使用动名词registering in the classroom作为介词after的宾语。 3.the改为a 考查冠词。不定冠词a/an表示泛指,而定冠词the通常表示特指。本句中a volunteer泛指“一位志愿者”。 4.which改为 whom 考查定语从句。本题定语从句的先行词是five roommates,所以使用whom指人,并作为介词of的宾语。 5.roommate 改为roommates 考查上下文串联。根据第三句I had five roommates可知我有五名舍友,所以本句要使用复数名词roommates。 6.去掉but 考查连词。连词although引导让步状语从句,but是引导转折关系的并列句,这两个连词是不能同时出现的。 7.to改为for 考查动词短语。短语leave for动身前往....;介词for后面要接目的地。句意:尽管我很不愿意和父亲说再见,第他不得不在晚上动身回家。 8.me改为 myself 考查反身代词。反身代词通常语义比较强烈,本句使用反身代词myself作为短语look after的宾语,表示强调。 9.then 后加did 考查固定句式。连词短语not until引导时间状语从句,放在句首的时候,要使用部分倒装句,要把助动词did提前。 10. 【名师点睛】 本文11. 形容词、副词:形容词、副词的误用主要指在该用形容词的地方用了副词,该用副词的地方用了形容词。改错行中出现形容词或副词时就要仔细分析该形容词或副词修饰什么,形式是否正确,是原级、比较级还是最高级。形容词、副词误用也是常考的改错项目之一。 1) I had not interest in English . interest是名词,应用形容词no来修饰,而not是副词,副词不能修饰名 2) These are the happier girls I’ve ever seen.(NMET2007) 此处有I've ever seen限定,应用最高级,故happier应改为 happiest. 3) You can borrow a book very easy.用副词修饰动词短语borrow a book,所以easy应改为easily. 4) These books are very worth reading.用well 修饰worth,这是固定搭配。 考点:考查短文改错
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