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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The earthquake affects the students of the destroying areas in many ways. How can we help them? One expert says the child will have feelings of fear, angry and feel they are not safe after the quake. They will find it hardly to focus. They will tend to cry and shout and tremble. And they might be afraid to be alone.The teenagers will find it difficult to live in a balance way. If things get worse they might not be able to focus to their studies. He also say we can do something to help the children. The first thing is that to build up trust with them, and be their friend. Then you have to give them sense of safety. Thirdly, try to satisfy their psychological needs. Be a good listener whether he or she needs to talk.

 

1.destroying → destroyed 2.child → children 3.angry → anger 4.hardly → hard 5.balance → balanced 6.to → on 7.say → says 8.去掉that 9.a sense of safety 10.whether → if 【解析】 1.destroying → destroyed考查形容词。此处修饰areas,表示被毁坏的地区,应该用形容词。故destroying → destroyed。 2.child → children考查名词的单复数。根据前文的them可知此处指的是孩子们。故child → children。 3.angry → anger考查形容词。此处与fear表示并列,根据fear可知,此处应该用名词形式。故angry → anger。 4.hardly → hard考查固定用法。find it adj 发现某事...,故hardly → hard。 5.balance → balanced考查形容词。此处修饰way,应该用形容词修饰。故balance → balanced。 6.to → on考查介词。Focus on致力于;对(某事或做某事)予以注意;故to → on。 7.say → says考查主谓一致。此处的主语是He,为第三人称单数形式。故say → says。 8.去掉that考查固定用法。To do表示目的,可直接用在be动词后。故去掉that。 9.a sense of safety考查冠词。此处表示安全感,是感觉得一种。故a sense of safety。 10.whether → if考查连词。句意:做一个好的听众,如果他或她需要说话。此处是if的条件句。故whether → if。 考点:考查短文改错 【名师点睛】 在短文改错中常出现的错误主要有以下几类: 1. 名词单复数用错,可数与不可数名词的混用。比如第72题:考查名词的单复数。根据前文的them可知此处指的是孩子们。故child → children。 2. 动词:时态和语态,常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时,中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象;或是及物动词后无宾语,或是不及物动词后加了宾语;需要接ing形式的接了to,或相反等。 3. 形容词副词:常出现需形容词的地方用了副词或相反;关系副词where, when, why等的缺失或错用。 4. 介词:主要是介词的多余或缺失,错用。比如第76题:考查介词。Focus on致力于;对(某事或做某事)予以注意;故to → on。 5. 主谓一致性:第三人称单数漏掉s,或主语为复数,谓语动词用了单数;再就是就近原则对主语的影响。比如第77题:考查主谓一致。此处的主语是He,为第三人称单数形式。故say → says。 6. 冠词:定冠词the的多余或缺失,如季节,月份,星期,球类及三餐活动,称呼头衔前等不能加the的地方加了the。比如第79题:考查冠词。此处表示安全感,是感觉得一种。故a sense of safety。 7. 数词:主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用。 8. 连词:不合句中的逻辑关系。如需转折连词(如but)的时候用了承接连词(so),或相反等等。比如第80题:考查连词。句意:做一个好的听众,如果他或她需要说话。此处是if的条件句。故whether → if。 9. 代词:主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词,单数用了复数代词或相反;应当用形容词性的物主代词用了宾格,主格或相反,关系代词的错用或缺失。 10. 常用固定短语或固定用法及句型用错。比如第78题:考查固定用法。To do表示目的,可直接用在be动词后。故去掉that。
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