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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Thanksgiving Day is one of the most important family holiday in America. All the members of a family, no matter where far away they are, will try to get together on that day. The first Thanksgiving in America takes place in October, 1621. In 1620, the group of Englishmen sailed to Massachusetts. They had expected to find a freely place to live in, so they experienced a hard winter. Half of them starved death. The next spring, we began farming. With the help of local Indians, they learned to be plant corn and raise animals. In the autumn, the fields produced a good harvest. Filling with joy and thanks to God, they held a celebration. In 1863, it became a national holiday.

 

1.holiday-holidays 2.where-how 3.takes-took 4.the group of –a group of 5. freely-free 6.so-but 7.starved 后加to 8. we-they 9.去掉be 10. Filling-Filled 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于记叙文,介绍了感恩节的由来。在17世纪,一群英国人来到了美国,在获得丰收以后,为了表示对上帝的感激之情,他们创办了感恩节。 1.holiday-holidays 考查名词单复数。在“one of+复数可数名词”结构中,要使用可数名词的复数形式,表示“....之一”。故本句使用holidays。 2.where-how 考查疑问副词。疑问副词where的后面不能接far away,而how后可接短语far away。句意:无论家庭成员相距多远,在感恩节这一天他们都要聚在一起。 3.takes-took 考查时态。本句的时间状语是in October, 1621,这是一个一般过去时的时间状语,谓语动词应该使用过去式took与之保持一致。 4.the group of –a group of 考查冠词。定冠词the 通常表示特指,不定冠词a通常表示泛指。本句介绍的是在1620年,一群英国人航海去了马萨诸塞州。并没有特指某一群人,所以使用不定冠词a。 5.freely-free 考查形容词。在英语中通常使用形容词做定语修饰名词,副词通常做状语修饰动词。本句中使用形容词free做定语修饰名词place。 6.so-but 考查连词。句意:他们原来期待找到一个自由的地方居住,但他们经历了一个艰难的冬天。上下文之间为转折关系,所以使用but表示转折关系。 7.starved 后加to 考查固定短语。短语starve to death饿死;其中的介词to是不能省略的。 8.we-they 考查上下文串联。根据上文中"a group of Englishmen"可知一群英国人来到了美国,使用代词they指代"a group of Englishmen"。 9.去掉be 考查不定式。动词不定式的结构为“to+动词原形”,本句中已经有了动词plant,所以系动词be是多余的。 10.Filling-Filled 考查形容词短语。短语be filled with充满....;该短语在句中对主语they进行说明。 【名师点睛】 短文改错中对于词法的测试考查较多,其中名词、代词、冠词以及介词要特别注意: 1.名词:主要是查名词是否可数,与其修饰语是否一致。 eg: 1) I have many hobby, such as football, sing, listen music. Hobby是可数名词,在这要用复数形式;playing football是一项运动,football只是一种球; sing和listen to 要用动名词形式。 2) Do exercises do good to our healthy. exercise作运动讲是不可数名词,do exercise作主语要用动名词形式,谓动用单数;healthy是形容词, 这里要用名词形式。 3) Reading books is one of my hobby. one of 后的名词应用复数形式。 2. 代词:对于短文中出现的每一个代词都要查一下它所指代的 内容及在句中的作用,注意其数、格、词性是否正确和前后是否一致,常考的代词包括人称代词、指示代词、反身代词、关系代词及疑问代词等。 1).He drove too fast, and the police stopped her. 前面提到的是he而后面却用her来代,故应将her改为him. 2).This is the best film which I have ever seen. 先行词前有最高级修饰应用关系代词that 而不是which。 3. 冠词:英语中只有三个冠词,但用起来却很复杂,在短文改 错中,错误不外乎该用冠词时没有用,不该用时却用了;该用an用了a,该用a(n)却用了the. 1) I meant to write letter and tell you all the things… letter为可数名词,故write后应加a. 2) I like playing the football. 去the 3) He is a honest boy. a改为an 4. 介词:检查介词主要是查介词与动词、形容词、名词的搭配, 介词惯用词组等是否正确。 1) I am writig to thank you with your kind help. thank sb. for sth.为固定搭配,故应将with 改为for. 2) …I’m the happiest in all. 此句想表达的意思是“我是所有人中最高兴的”。故应将in改为 of. 3) Under the help of my father, I … under 改为 with 4) He went to Beijing in next Sunday. in 改为on 考点:考查短文改错
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