Question

短文改错

Dear Sir,

I’m glad to learn that part-time assistants were wanted in your studio and I’d like to have a try. I’m a student who is graduated from high school soon. Before attending the college, I’ll have a long holiday and I’m determined to make the best of them. Since childhood, I have developed a strong interest in storytelling and watching films. My teacher thinks high of my performance in the language class, when I have also acquired a good knowledge of American movie industry. Except that, I am monitor of my class and thus have gained many experience in management.

I will undertake full responsibility and spare no effort to do my share of work. I am fully convinced that through communication with the staffs, I can get some valuable work experience as well as develop my social skills.

I’m looking forward to receiving your reply soon. Thank you for your consider.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

1.were—are;

2.graduated—graduating;

3.去掉 “attend” 后 “the”;

4.them—it;

5.high—highly;

6.when—where;

7.Except—Besides;

8.many—much;

9.staffs—staff;

10.consider—consideration

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于应用文，李华写信给对方希望得到一份兼职工作，在信中他介绍了自己的个人信息。

1.were—are;考查时态。叙述当前应用一般现在时，根据主语part-time assistants谓语动词应用复数形式。

2.graduated—graduating;考查时态。本处进行时表将来，主动语态。

3.去掉 “attend” 后 “the”;考查固定搭配及该词用法。动词短语attend college上大学。

4.them—it;考查代词。本处代指holiday，应用it指代上文出现的同一事物。

5.high—highly; 考查副词。在英语中通常使用副词做状语修饰形容词、副词、动词或整个句子。本题中使用副词highly修饰动词think。

6.when—where;考查定语从句先行词the language class，代入定语从句中做地点状语，应用where。

7.Except—Besides; 考查副词。besides“除了……之外（还有）”还可以作为副词表示递进关系，意为“而且”；except“除了”。由语境可知，此处应用Besides。

8.many—much;考查形容词。形容词many通常修饰可数名词复数形式，而much通常修饰不可数名词，本句中是不可数名词experience(经验)，应用much。

9.staffs—staff;考查名词。 staff(员工)本身即为集合名词，不能加-s。

10.

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