Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删减或修改。

增加； 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除； 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改； 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意； 1. 每处错误及其修改的均仅限一词。

       2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Trying to come to a decision complete on your own can be risky. Some decisions are very important that they shouldn’t made without talking to others first. There have several advantages if you consult the persons you trust. For one thing, they can give you valuable advice and they may point out some things you may have been overlooked. For another, friends may stop you from making big mistakes.

When consult others about important decisions, you should keep two things on mind. The first one is that you need to find someone whom you respected enough to trust his or her judgment. The second thing to consider is how to do if you disagree with this person. Maybe turning to a third or fourth person for help is a good choice. In a word, making any big decision alone can lead to problems. Talking to friends or family members first are always a good idea.

Answer

1.complete→completely

2.very→so

3.made前加be

4.have→are

5.去掉been

6.consult→consulting

7.on→in

8.respected→respect

9.how→what

10.are→is

【解析】

试题分析：通过修改作文方式的短文，考查学生对固定搭配，动词时态和语态，名词的单复数问题等。

1.修饰动词用副词，故改为completely。

2....that...如此……以至于，为固定搭配。

3. 考查被动语态。they指代decisions，这里表示“决定被做出”，应该用被动语态，所以这里should后需加be。

4.句意：如果你咨询你信任的人有几个优势。该句为there be句型，所以需将have改为are。

5. 考查主动语态。这里you作主语，需用主动语态，所以这里需去掉been。

6. 考查非谓语动词。这里you和consult之间是主动关系，所以这里需用现在分词。

7.keep...in mind记在心里，所以这里需用介词in。

8. 考查时态。这里需用一般现在时，所以respected需改为respect。

9. 考查疑问词。句意：第二件要考虑的事情是如果你不同意这个人的观点你要做什么。how怎么样，这里应该用what to do，所以需将how改为what。

10. 考查主谓一致。该句是动名词作主语，or表选择关系，故be动词需用单数形式is，所以需将are改为is。

考点：语篇理解以及语法知识。