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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在下面写出增加的词;

删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉;

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。

One day a lady saw a mouse running across his kitchen floor. She was very afraid of mice, so she ran out of the house, getting on a bus and went to a nearby shop. Here she bought a mousetrap and was advised to put any cheese in it. The lady went home with her mousetrap, and could not find any cheese. She had no choice but cut a picture of some cheese out of a magazine and put it in the trap. Surprising, the picture of the cheese is quite “successful”! When the lady came down to the kitchen in the next morning, she found a picture of a mouse in the trap besides the picture of the cheese!

 

1.his →her 2.getting →got 3.Here →There 4.any →some 5.and →but 6.cut前加to 7.Surprising →Surprisingly 8.is →was 9.去掉in 10.besides →beside 【解析】 试题分析:一位女士发现家里有老鼠就买了捕鼠器,店主建议她在捕鼠器上放一些奶酪。但她找不到奶酪,就放了一张奶酪图片,第二天发现奶酪图片旁边多了一张老鼠图片。 1. →her.考查代词。句中主语是a lady是女性,指“她的厨房”物主代词要用her,故his改为her。 2. →got.考查时态。此处是并列句,与ran和went一致用过去式,故getting →got。 3. →There.考查副词。指在商店那里她买了捕鼠器,根据句意和情境,故Here 改为There。 4. →some.考查形容词。any表示“一些,任何”,用于否定句和疑问句;some表示“一些”用于肯定句。此处是肯定句,故any改为some。 5. →but.考查连词。此处指她拿着捕鼠器回家了但找不到奶酪,前后句是转折关系,故and改为but。 6..考查动词形式。have no choice but to do sth.表示“没有选择只能做某事”,but后用不定式,故cut前加to。 7. →Surprisingly.考查副词。此处单独使用作状语,修饰后面整个句子,要用副词,故Surprising改为Surprisingly。 8. →was.考查动词时态。全文讲述的是过去发生的事,故用过去时,故is改为was。 9..考查介词。表示时间的next短语前面不加冠词,故去掉in。 10. →beside.考查介词。besides表示“此外”,beside表示“在……旁边”;此处表示在奶酪图片的旁边,故besides改为beside。 考点:考查对文章的理解和词汇、语法知识 【名师点睛】 短文改错答题技巧: 高中英语短文改错题具有“高起点、低落点”的特点,对学生的语言感觉和语言能力要求较高,但改正的错误往往比较简单。很多学生做不好改错题不是因为没有掌握这些语法知识,而是不能通过语感找出错误。所以培养学生有意识地去注意一些高考短文改错的常考点非常重要。 一、查时态是否一致 时态错误几乎是每年短文改错中必设的改错题。要有目的地去检查文中的每一个谓语动词的时态与上下文、语境以及该句的时间状语是否相符和一致。比如98小题考查动词时态。全文讲述的是过去发生的事用过去时,故is →was. 二、查主谓是否一致 在检查谓语动词的时态和语态是否正确的同时,还要注意检查该动词在人称和数上是否与主语保持了一致。 主谓语一致的情况较为复杂,考生平时学习要留心归纳。有些特殊句式的主谓一致问题很容易被忽视,如倒装句、关系代词在定语从句中做主语的情况等,答题时要高度重视。 三、查指代是否一致 对于短文中出现的每一个代词都要查一下它所指代的内容以及在句中的作用,注意其数、格、词性是否正确和前后一致,包括人称代词、指示代词、反身代词、关系代词以及疑问代词等。指代错误也是高考改错题中常设的改错题。第91小题考查代词。句中主语是a lady是女性,指“她的厨房”物主代词要用her,故his →her. 四、查平行结构是否平行一致 由and,or,but,either…or…,neither…nor…,not only …but also…,as well as等并列连词和词 组连接的结构可称为平行结构。平行结构在词性、时态、非谓语动词的形式上往往要求前后一致。答题时要留心平行结构前后是否对等平行,这也是常设的错误。92小题考查时态。此处是并列句由and连接,与ran和went一致用过去式,故getting →got. 五、查名词的单复数与修饰词语或上下文是否一致 名词数的错误也是高考常设的改错题。要查一下名词是否可数,与其修饰语是否一致。 六、查行文逻辑是否一致 查这方面的错误应从文章整体内容出发,通篇考虑,以行为单位是难以发现这种错误的。逻辑不一致主要是由肯定与否定、关联词语以及动词(如come与go,take与bring)的误用所造成的,应多从这方面去查找。 总之,短文改错要注意联系上下文和时态的变化,做题时应以句子为单位,同时兼顾改错的原则。这个原则就是不能改变原意,不能轻易去掉动词、名词等实词,去掉的通常是固定搭配结构中多余的部分。同样,增加的词也是固定搭配中缺少的部分或者是定语从句中的先行词或介词。
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