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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I’d like to share with you my progresses on study in these three years. To be honest, I was not so good at my study when I came to high school, often feel tired out and at loss. Sometimes, I am even on the point of giving up. Therefore, my change happened when my teachers and my classmates as well as came to encourage me one day in Senior Two. It was their encouragement and my own thinking that resulted in my mchievements in study final.

Still not a top student although I am now, I have found myself filled with greatly confidence to face any difficulty and challenge. There is no doubt that I am bound to fight with my dream to the end in the coming months

 

1.progresses→progress 2.feel→feeling 3.在loss前加a 4.am→was 5.Therefore→However 6.删去第二个as 7.final→finally 8.although→as/though 9.greatly→great 10.with→for 【解析】 【试题分析】 1.】progresses→progress 考查名词单复数。progress为不可数名词,没有复数形式,故把progresses改为progress。 2.】feel→feeling 考查现在分词作伴随状语。句意:老实说,当我上高中时我并不擅长学习,经常感觉疲惫以及不知所措。两句之间没有连接词,而且前面句子I是后面句子的逻辑主语,故后面句子不是句子,而是状语,故要用非谓语动词作状语,根据与主语是主动关系,故应该用现在分词,故把feel改为feeling。 3.在loss前加a 考查固定短语。at a loss困惑,不知所措。故在loss前加a。 4.was 句意:有时我甚至想要放弃。根据文章可知是一般过去时,故把am改为was。 5. 考查副词。句意:但是当我上高二时,我的老师和同学有一天鼓励我,使我发生了改变。根据句意可知这里和上文是转折,故Therefore→However。 6. 考查固定用法。As well as后面必须加与前面成分相同的词语,但这里后面是谓语动词,故去掉第二个as,as well表示“也;同样地”。 7. 考查副词。句意:是他们的鼓励和我自己的思考最终导致我学习的进步。修饰动词要用副词,故final改为finally。 8.although→as/though 考查连词。句意:尽管我现在仍然不是顶尖的学生,我发现自己非常的自信。这里倒装句,不能用although,可以用as或者though。故although改为as/though。 9.greatly→great 考查形容词。great confidence极大的自信。用形容词great修饰名词confidence,故greatly改为great。 10.with→for 考查介词。fight with和某人打架;fight for my dream为梦想而奋斗。故with改为for 考点:考查对文章的理解和词汇、语法知识。 【名师点睛】 as引导让步状语从句倒装的用法 一、名词 + as / though + 主语 + 动词 King as he was, he was unhappy. 他虽是国王,但他并不幸福。 Child as he is, he knows to help other. 他虽是个孩子,却知道帮助别人。 【说明】其中的动词通常为连系动词,也就是说位于句首的名词是其后连系动词的表语。另外,要特别注意位于句首的名词前习惯上不用冠词,即使其前有形容词修饰也不用冠词。比较: Boy as [though] he is, he likes to play with girls.=Though he is a boy,he likes to play with girls. 他虽是男孩,却喜欢与女孩子玩。 Strong man as [though] he is, General Botha has been severely put to the test during the past few weeks.= Though he is a strong man, General Botha has been severely put to the test during the past few weeks. 波赛将军虽然坚强,但在过去的数周里也受到了严峻的考验。 二、形容词 + as / though + 主语 + 动词 Successful as he is,he is not proud. 他虽然成功,但不骄傲。 Improbable as it seems,it’s true. 虽然看起来不太可能,但却是真的。 Patient as he was,he didn’t like waiting that long. 他虽说有耐心,也不愿等这么长。 【说明】其中的动词也通常为连系动词,也就是说位于句首的形容词是其后连系动词的表语。 三、副词 + as / though + 主语 + 动词 Much as I like Paris,I couldn’t live there. 尽管我喜欢巴黎,但我不能住在那里。 Hard though they tried,they couldn’t make her change her mind. 尽管他们做了很大努力,却没法让她改变主意。 Fast as you read, you can’t finish the book in two days. 尽管你读得很快,你总不能在两天之内就读完这本书。 He was unable to make much progress,hard as he tried. 尽管他做了努力,却未能取得很大进步。 【说明】有的词典将 much as 作为习语看待,认为它是一个用以引导让步状语从句的复合连词。再如: Much as I admire him as a writer,I do not like him as a man. 他作为一名作家我很佩服他,但我却不喜欢他这个人。 Much as I like you,I couldn’t live with you. 我尽管很喜欢你,却不能和你在一起生活。 四、动词原形 + as / though + 主语 + 动词 Object as you may,I’ll go.纵使你反对,我也要去。 Try as he might,he couldn’t solve the problem. 尽管他想方设法,却未解决这个问题。 Search as they would,they would find nobody in the house. 无论怎样搜查,他们在房子里仍然没有找到一个人。 【说明】主语后的动词通常为 may,might,would,did 等情态动词或助动词(若表示情态意义,则选用情态动词;若陈述事实,则用 did,do 等助动词)。 五、分词 + as / though + 主语 + 动词 Raining hard as it is, I’m going out for a walk. 虽然正在下着大雨,我还是要出去散步。 Surrounded as we were by the enemy,we managed to march forward. 虽然我们被敌人包围着,但我们还是设法前进了。 【三条补充说明】 1.这类倒装的让步状语从句可用 as, though 来引导,不能用 although 来引导;但是,未倒装的让步状语从句却可用 though, although 来引导,而不能用 as 来引导。也就是说, although 引导让步状语从句时不能倒装,as 引导让步状语从句时必须倒装,而 though 引导让步状语从句时可以倒装也可以不倒装。如: 虽然很晚了,但我们还是继续工作。 正:Late as [though] it was,we still went on working. 正:Though it was late,we still went on working. 误:Late although it was,we still went on working . 误:As it was late,we still went on working. 2. 上面提到的倒装结构有时也可用来表示原因,区别的办法主要看句子的内容:让步从句的内容大多数与主句在意义上相反,而原因从句则与主句之间有因果关系。比较: Tired as he was,he sat up late studying at night. 昨晚他虽然很疲倦了,但还是学习到很晚才睡。(表让步) Tired as he was,he went to bed early. 因为很累,所以他睡得很早。(表原因) Young as he was,he was equal to the task. 他虽年轻,却能胜任这项工作。(表让步) Young as he was,he was not equal to the task. 他因为年轻,所以不能胜任这项工作。(表原因) 3. 在美国英语中,人们通常用 as...as 引导让步状语从句。如: Cold as it was, we went out.=As cold as it was, we went out. 尽管天气冷,我们还是出去了。 Successful as he is, he is not proud.=As successful as he is, he is not proud. 他虽成功了,但不骄傲。
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