Question

假定你是李华，目前正处于高三阶段。与你同为高三的好友李杰写信向你征求如何为高考做准备。你给他写一封回信谈谈高考备考的注意事项并陈述你的理由：

注意事项	理由
1. 保持良好的心态 2. 目标明确 3. 与父母、老师或同学沟通 4. 作息合理，饮食均衡	1. 有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气 2. 正确评价自己 3. …… 4. ……

注意： 1. 词数100左右 ， 开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）；

2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇： 明确的 (definite)    评价(estimation)

Dear Li Jie ,

I have received your letter. No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination.                                              _____________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Li Jie ,

I have received your letter. No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination. Yet what should we do in order to achieve success? Here are some suggestions.

First, it’s vital to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely. Meanwhile, we should have a definite goal and a correct estimation of ourselves. Only in this way will we face everything in life more objectively. Besides, we’d better talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when we are in trouble. Finally, striking a good balance between study and rest keeps us energetic and a healthy diet is useful as well.

With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假定你是李华，目前正处于高三阶段。与你同为高三的好友李杰写信向你征求如何为高考做准备。你给他写一封回信谈谈高考备考的注意事项并陈述你的理由。注意事项：1.保持良好的心态；2.目标明确；3.与父母、老师或同学沟通；4.作息合理，饮食均衡。理由：1.有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气；2.正确评价自己；3. ……；4. ……。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意： 1. 词数100左右 ， 开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）；2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】采用三段式，语言简练，布局合理，运用高级句子。Yet what should we do in order to achieve success?动词不定式表示目的状语；First, it’s vital to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely.for在这里表示“原因”，引导并列句；Only in this way will we face everything in life more objectively.部分倒装堪称经典：Besides, we’d better talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when we are in trouble.非限制性定语从句用于句中；Finally, striking a good balance between study and rest keeps us energetic and a healthy diet is useful as well.动词不定式短语做主语；With these done,with的独立主格结构；另外，First, Meanwhile, Besides, as well.为文章增色添彩。

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