Question

假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中至多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

This morning I saw off my aunt at railway station. There were many passenger in the waiting room. I saw an old lady crying sad because she had lost her ticket and not able to afford another one. I was thinking about helping her when a man come up to comfort her. Then he bought her a ticket with his own money. The old Lady was so moving that she could hardly say a word. She grasped his hand and asked for his name or address. But he only smile and said, “It’s my pleasure.” Then he left away quickly. I was greatly moved by such a man he warmed others with his love.

Answer

1.at ∧railway加the

2.passenger→passengers

3.sad→sadly

4.and ∧not加was

5.come→came

6.moving→moved

7.or→and

8.smile→smiled

9.去掉away

10.he→who

【解析】

试题分析：作者早上在火车站送姑姑，看到一位男士帮一位买不起车票的妇女买票，作者深受感动。

1.at ∧railway加the 考查定冠词the的用法。句意：今天早上我去车站给我婶婶送行。因为是特指的车站，所以at后加the。

2.passenger→passengers 考查名词。前面有many修饰，故后面要用名词的复数形式，所以要在passenger后加s。

3.→sadly 考查副词用法。sad是形容词，修饰动词cry要用副词形式，所以要在sad后加ly

4.and ∧not加was 考查be able to do sth的用法。她负担不起再买一张票。be able to do sth.意为“能做某事”，所以要在not able to前加was。

5.→came 考查时态。一位男士走上前去安慰她。因为全文都是过去时，所以要用come的过去式形式，所以要把come改为came。

6.→moved 考查语态。老妇人如此感动，她几乎一个字都说不出来了。老妇人是被男士的善举感动了，所以要用被动语态be moved，所以要把moving改为moved。

7.→and 考查连词。根据题干分析，她抓住了男士的手并询问他的名字和地址，所以要用表示并列的and，所以把or改为and。

8.→smiled 考查时态。根据题干分析，但是他只笑了笑，全文都是过去时，所以smile要用过去时，所以smile改为smiled。

9.away 考查动词。根据题干分析，然后他很快地离开了。所以left后的away去掉。

10.→who 考查定语从句。根据题干分析，我被这个用爱去温暖他人的男士感动了。he warmed others with his love句中有谓语动词，而且它与前面句子是在同一句里，所以应该是定语从句，he不能引导定语从句，要用who。

考点：考查语篇理解和词汇、语法知识