Question

假设大庆电视台打算开办“All-around Daqing” 的英文节目，节目编辑助理John就该节目向广大中学生征求意见。假如你是学生李华，请根据以下内容给John写一封信：

1. 该节目应当介绍当地的历史、教育、饮食文化、著名景点；

2. 播出时间应安排在每周六晚上，方便学生看；

3. 希望学生们有机会参与主持该节目。

提示词：主持：host

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear John,

I’ve learned that you’re going to set up an English program All-around Daqing for middle school students.___________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours sincerely,

                                                                      Li Hua

Answer

Dear John,

I’ve learned that you’re going to set up an English program All-around Daqing for middle school students. So I’m writing to make some suggestions.

Firstly, the program should cover the topics like the history and education of Daqing. Secondly, it will be very interesting if the program is to cover the famous scenic spots of Daqing. Thirdly, I think local food is a must, for food is born out of culture. And I hope the program will be broadcast on Saturday evenings, when we students are free to watch it. Last but not least, I’d suggest that students be given some chances to host the program.

If you could take my suggestions into consideration, I would be more than happy and thankful.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假设大庆电视台打算开办“All-around Daqing” 的英文节目，节目编辑助理John就该节目向广大中学生征求意见。假如你是学生李华，请根据以下内容给John写一封信：1. 该节目应当介绍当地的历史、教育、饮食文化、著名景点；2. 播出时间应安排在每周六晚上，方便学生看；3. 希望学生们有机会参与主持该节目。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】书信格式正确，采用三段式，文章结构严谨，布局合理，层次分明，句中使用高级词汇和高级句式。I’ve learned that you’re going to set up an English program All-around Daqing for middle school students.运用宾语从句；it will be very interesting if the program is to cover the famous scenic spots of Daqing.条件状语从句恰到好处；I think local food is a must, for food is born out of culture. for在此表示“原因”，引导并列句；I hope the program will be broadcast on Saturday evenings, when we students are free to watch it.一般将来时态的被动语态和when引导的定语从句完美结合；I’d suggest that students be given some chances to host the program.宾语从句里面用虚拟语气；If you could take my suggestions into consideration, I would be more than happy and thankful. if引导的非真实条件句，堪称经典；另外，Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Last but not least,的使用显得文章有章法，为文章增色。

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