Question

短文改错

英语课上，老师要求同桌相互修改作文。假设以下作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出改加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

         2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Li Hui, my friend in high school, has dreamed becoming a cartoon artist since she was young. To her disappointed, her parents don’t agree with her decision at first. Therefore, Li Hui would not change her mind. She worked hardly to perfect her skills. Just before he finished high school, the chance came: the famous art school was holding a cartoon drawing competition. The first three winner would be given a scholarship to study drawing there. Li Hui told herself not to missing the chance. She readily entered the competition and came second. She is now a student in that school and I feel it certain that her dream will come true.

Answer

1.dreamed后加of或about

2.disappointed → disappointment

3.don’t → didn’t

4.Therefore → However

5.hardly → hard

6.he → she

7.the → a

8.winner → winners

9.missing → miss

10.去掉it

【解析】

试题分析：文章讲述了高中同学李慧为了梦想努力学习画画，最终实现梦想的故事。

1.dreamed后加of或about.考查固定短语。此处指他梦想成为一名卡通大师。dream of/about梦想……，故dreamed后加of或about。

2.disappointed → disappointment.考查名词。“令某人失望的是”是to one’s disappointment，故把disappointed改为disappointment。

3.don’t → didn’t.考查时态。故事是高中时发生的事，要用过去时，故把don’t 改为didn’t。

4.Therefore → However.考查连词。句意：她的父母起初不同意她的决定，然而她没有改变主意。此处表示转折不是因果，故把Therefore改为However。

5.hardly → hard.考查副词。hardly几乎不；hard努力地。此处指她努力工作完善技能。故把hardly改为hard。

6.he → she.考查代词。上文提到李慧，代词用的是she，这里还是指她，故把he 改为she。

7.the → a.考查冠词。此处指一次机会来了，表示一次，故把the改为a。

8.winner → winners.考查名词。此处指前三名获胜者，所以名词要用复数形式，故把winner改为winners。

9.missing → miss.考查动词形式。tell sb. not to do sth.告诉某人不要做某事，to后用动词原形，故把missing改为miss。

10.去掉it.考查代词。此处指我确信，feel是系动词，certain是表语，不用it。故去掉it。