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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用(﹨)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Li Hua and I were neighboures and we went to same school. We always went to school together. We were good friend and had a great deal to share with every day. However, one day, Li Hua copied my homework, which made me such angry that I did not want to be friends with him any long. Then on Monday morning I ran downstairs without realize it was raining, but there was no time to return home to fetch an umbrella. It happens that Li Hua was just around the corner and be offered to share her umbrella with me. He made apology to me in a gently voice. I forgave him but gave him a hug.

 

1.same前面加the 2.friend→friends 3.with去掉 4.such→so 5.long→longer 6.realize→realizing 7.happens→happened 8.her→his 9.gently→gentle 10.but→and 【解析】 1.same前面加the 考查冠词。same前通常都有the,表示特指“同样地;一样”,故在same前面加the。 2.friend→friends 考查名词的单复数。主语是复数,指我们是好朋友。故friend改为其复数形式friends。 3.with去掉 考查固定用法。这里表示有很多东西分享,不是和某人分享。故with去掉。 4.such→so 考查固定句型。so...that...如此……以至于……。 5.long→longer 考查固定用法。not any longer="no" longer不再。故将long改为longer。 6.realize→realizing 考查动词。without是介词,后面接动名词。故将realize改为realizing。 7.happens→happened 考查时态。本文主体时态为过去时,故将happens改为happened。 8.her→his 考查代词。主语是he,是男性,故后面物主代词用his。故将her改为his。 9.gently→gentle 考查形容词。形容词修饰名词。故将gently改为gentle。 10.but→and 考查连词。句意:我原谅了他并给他一个拥抱。不是转折关系,只是顺接关系。故将but改为and。 考点:考查短文改错 【名师点睛】 在短文改错中常出现的错误主要有以下几类: 1. 名词单复数用错,可数与不可数名词的混用。比如第2题:考查名词的单复数。主语是复数,指我们是好朋友。故friend---friends。 2. 动词:时态和语态,常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时,中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象;或是及物动词后无宾语,或是不及物动词后加了宾语;需要接ing形式的接了to,或相反等。比如第7题:考查时态。本文主体时态为过去时。故happens---happened。 3. 形容词副词:常出现需形容词的地方用了副词或相反;关系副词where, when, why等的缺失或错用。 4. 介词:主要是介词的多余或缺失,错用。比如第3题:考查固定用法。这里表示有很多东西分享,不是和某人分享。故with every day---every day。 5. 主谓一致性:第三人称单数漏掉s,或主语为复数,谓语动词用了单数;再就是就近原则对主语的影响。 6. 冠词:定冠词the的多余或缺失,如季节,月份,星期,球类及三餐活动,称呼头衔前等不能加the的地方加了the。比如第1题:考查冠词。the表示特指同一所学校。故same school---the same school。 7. 数词:主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用。 8. 连词:不合句中的逻辑关系。如需转折连词(如but)的时候用了承接连词(so),或相反等等。比如第10题: 考查连词。句意:我原谅了他并给他一个拥抱,没有转折关系,只是顺接关系。故but--and。 9. 代词:主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词,单数用了复数代词或相反;应当用形容词性的物主代词用了宾格,主格或相反,关系代词的错用或缺失。比如第9题:考查代词。主语是he,是男性,故使用his。故her--his。 10. 常用固定短语或固定用法及句型用错。比如第5题:考查固定用法。not any longer="no" longer不再。故long--- longer。
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