Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

For a person, belief always plays an important role in his life. Anyone who has strong belief can enjoy a colorfully life. Otherwise, he will lose him in his own way of life. Belief is so important what it can change one’s fate. Marie Curie, famous scientist, also has set a good example. In 1898, Marie find a new element. In order to improve her discovery, Marie and her husband worked hardly. At last they saw at the dim blue light of new element—radium, which made her dream came true.

To my personal view, it can be seen that one with firmly-held belief is likely to getting successful and master his own life.

Answer

1.colorfully→colorful

2.him→himself

3.what→that

4.famous前面加a

5.find→found

6.hardly→hard

7.删掉saw后的at

8.came→come

9.To→In

10.getting→get

【解析】

1.colorfully→colorful 考查词性。此处修饰life，应该用形容词修饰。故colorfully改为colorful。

2.him→himself 考查代词。句意：他会用自己的生活方式失去自我。故him改为himself。

3.what→that 考查连词。根据前文的so，后文应该用that连接，so...that...如此……以至于……，故what改为that。

4.famous前面加a 考查冠词。此处指的是一个著名的科学家，故famous前面加a。

5.find→found 考查时态。根据文章的时态可知，此处应该用过去时。故find改为found。

6.hardly→hard 考查固定用法。work hard指的是工作努力。故hardly改为hard。

7.删掉saw后的at 考查介词。see是及物动词，后面可以直接加内容。故删掉saw后的at。

8.came→come 考查固定用法。make是使役动词，后面动词要用原形，故came改为come。

9.To→In 考查固定用法。此处指的是in my personal view（在我个人看来）。故To改为In。

10.getting→get 考查动词。be likely to do有可能做某事，故getting改为get。

考点：考查对文章的理解和语法知识