Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It doesn't matter to fail as long as you don't give up. To my opinion, it is hard to be successful. Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up. And you won't necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try. That's okay. Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who've had the most failure. J．K. Rowling, who wrote HarryPotter, had her first Harry Potter book was rejected 12 times before it was finally published. Michael Jordan was removed his high school basketball team. He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career. But he once said, “I have failed over and over and over again in my life. And that's because I succeed.”

Answer

1.to→in

2.were→are

3.necessary→ necessarily

4.for the first time →去掉for

5.one→ones

6.failure→failures

7.was rejected→去掉was

8.cut∧ his high→from

9.miss →missed

10.because→why

【解析】

试题分析：本文叙述了挑战是在我们人生中必要的一部分。还列举了杰克·罗琳的第一本《哈利波特》被拒绝了12次才出版的故事；迈克尔乔丹被从他的高中篮球队裁下来，错失了很多进球，终于成功了的故事。

1.to→in考查介词。短语in my opinion “依我来看”。因此此处把介词to改为介词in。故改为in。

2.were→are考查时态。根据时间状语从句as you grow up，可知此处应用一般现在时，故把were改为are。

3.necessary→ necessarily考查副词。修饰动词succeed，故此处用副词 necessarily。

4.for the first time →去掉for考查短语。for the first time “首次，第一次”，独立作状语。 the first time“第一次”连词，后接从句，不能独立使用。因此处有从句 you try，故用连词 the first time.因此去掉介词for。

5.one→ones考查代词。根据the one代指的是Some of the most successful people一些成功的人，是复数，故此处应用ones。

6.failure→failures考查名词。根据Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who’ve had the most failure. 世界上一些最成功的人是经历失败最多的人。failure失败，是不可数名词；失败的人或事，是可数名词。由the most“最多”来修饰，表示失败的事，因此此处用failures。

7.was rejected→去掉was考查动词。Have sth.done 遭受。根据句意:她的第一部《哈利·波特》被拒绝了12次。因此此处去掉动词was。

8.cut∧ his high→from考查介词。根据句意：迈克尔乔丹被从他的高中篮球队裁下来，因此此处应加上介词from. cut from 从......才下来。故添加from。

9.miss →missed考查时态。 连词 and 前后并列，前面的是动词lost 是一般过去时，故此处也是一般过去时 ，因此把miss改为missed。

10.because→why考查名词性从句。根据句意：这就是我为什么成功了。因此此处用代词why。

考点：考查短语词汇和句型的掌握与运用能力。