Question

书面表达

假如你是某英文报社编辑Linda，你收到了中学生David的来信。请阅读这封信后给他回信。

Dear Ms Linda,

Though I am living in a wealthy family, I don’t feel as happy as other boys because I’m forbidden to do what I want to, such as surfing the Internet, playing with my friends, buying what I want, and so on. My parents ask me to study all day. I feel they are too hard on me. I often feel upset as I have no freedom. What shall I do? I will greatly appreciate it if you could give me some advice.

Yours,

回信应包含以下两个要点：1. 简述自己的类似经历；2. 提出至少两条建议。

Dear David,

I can understand how you feel. When I was young,

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Yours,

Linda

Answer

Dear David,

I can understand how you feel. When I was young, I had the same experience as you do. But after I talked with my parents heart to heart, we had a better understanding of each other. So you should try to communicate with your parents to let them know that you are wise enough to manage your own business well. To understand them better, always put yourself in their position. Don’t you think that all parents in the world love their children even though they are sometimes strict and serious? If you can spend your time and money more wisely, I’m sure that your parents will trust you and you will enjoy more freedom.

By the way, it’s acceptable that your parents ask you to put your study in the first place.

I hope that my advice is of help to you.

Yours,

Linda

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文写作。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】When I was young, I had the same experience as you do.运用时间状语从句；So you should try to communicate with your parents to let them know that you are wise enough to manage your own business well. 运用宾语从句；If you can spend your time and money more wisely, I’m sure that your parents will trust you and you will enjoy more freedom.运用条件状语从句；By the way, it’s acceptable that your parents ask you to put your study in the first place.运用固定句式；I hope that my advice is of help to you.运用固定句式；Don’t you think that all parents in the world love their children even though they are sometimes strict and serious?此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。

考点：考查提纲类作文