Question

书面表达

假设你是李华，你校英文报“My Point of View”一栏拟刊登“家庭与孩子成长”有关的内容。现在很多家庭只有一个孩子，这样的环境对孩子的成长是否有利？如果一个家庭可以有两个孩子，那对孩子的成长又有什么样的利弊？请你就这个话题给校报编辑写一封信，谈谈你的看法。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Editor,

With the implementing of family planning policy, most families have only one child.

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Answer

Dear Editor,

With the implementing of family planning policy, most families have only one child. There are lots of problems with these children, one of which is the lack of the ability to deal with other people. Basically, when born in a family without siblings, a child is usually vain and arrogant, even sometimes indifferent and rebellious. All these disadvantages may contribute to unhappiness of his or her life.

Recently a new policy has been adjusted nationwide, which allows a family to have two children. In the process of growing, the two can take care of each other, and share too much in common, which is beneficial to their character building and psychological health.

In my view, it is better to have two children in a family than only one.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于话题类作文。先理清自己要写的要点，大致决定要点排列的先后顺序。然后用简单的句子将大纲内容列出来。之后联系上下文，适当拓展内容，自然过渡，让句子之间衔接紧密。根据语意采用适合的句型。将之前完成的简单句转换为复合句（或者用非谓语的简单句或者并列句）。使用连词将各个句子串联起来，最后检查。

【亮点说明】There are lots of problems with these children, one of which is the lack of the ability to deal with other people. 运用there be句型；one of which is the lack of the ability to deal with other people.运用定语从句；Basically, when born in a family without siblings, a child is usually vain and arrogant, even sometimes indifferent and rebellious. 运用时间状语从句；Recently a new policy has been adjusted nationwide, which allows a family to have two children. 宾语从句和固定句式完美结合；In the process of growing, the two can take care of each other, and share too much in common, which is beneficial to their character building and psychological health.此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。

考点：考查话题类作文