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短文改错 文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除...

短文改错

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。

As is well-known that birds are our friends. But the large number of birds have been killed for food. The other day I was walking in the woods while a shot was heard. Hearing the shot, the bird in the trees flew to all directions. A bird was badly injured and looked sadly. Finding the bird injured, so I decided to take it home. At home I take good care of it. When it recovered, I returned itself to the woods .I hope something should be done to prevent birds from killed.

 

1.As-It 2.the-a 3.while- when 4.bird-birds 5.to-in 6. sadly-sad 7.去掉so 8.take – took 9. itself-it 10.from killed 中间加being 【解析】 1. 2. 3. while是during the time that,只指一段时间,因此when引导的时间状语从句中的动词可以是终止性动词,也可以是延续性动词,而while从句中的动词必须是延续性动词。 when 说明从句的动作和主句的动作可以是同时,也可以是先后发生;while 则强调主句的动作在从句动作的发生的过程中或主从句两个动作同时发生。故 while- when。 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. 考点:考查短文改错 【名师点睛】 在短文改错中常出现的错误主要有以下几类: 1.名词单复数用错,可数与不可数名词的混用。比如第4题: 考查名词单复数。此处指的是很多鸟在树林里。故bird-birds。 2.动词:时态和语态,常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时,中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象;或是及物动词后无宾语,或是不及物动词后加了宾语;需要接ing形式的接了to,或相反等。比如第8题:考查时态。这是在讲过去的事情,故用过去时态。故take – took。 3. 形容词副词:常出现需形容词的地方用了副词或相反;关系副词where, when, why等的缺失或错用。 4. 介词:主要是介词的多余或缺失,错用。比如第5题:考查介词。in all directions四面八方,各方面;to all directions所有的方向。故to-in。 5. 主谓一致性:第三人称单数漏掉s,或主语为复数,谓语动词用了单数;再就是就近原则对主语的影响。 6. 冠词:定冠词the的多余或缺失,如季节,月份,星期,球类及三餐活动,称呼头衔前等不能加the的地方加了the。比如第2题:考查固定用法。句意:大量的鸟被食物杀害了。故 the-a。 7. 数词:主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用。 8. 连词:不合句中的逻辑关系。如需转折连词(如but)的时候用了承接连词(so),或相反等等。比如第7题:考查连词。此处前后不是两个独立的句子,且前一句为后一句的原因从句。故去掉so。 9. 代词:主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词,单数用了复数代词或相反;应当用形容词性的物主代词用了宾格,主格或相反,关系代词的错用或缺失。比如第9题:考查代词。It代指小鸟。故itself-it。 10. 常用固定短语或固定用法及句型用错。比如第3题: 考查固定用法。when是at or during the time that, 既指时间点,也可指一段时间; while是during the time that,只指一段时间,因此when引导的时间状语从句中的动词可以是终止性动词,也可以是延续性动词,而while从句中的动词必须是延续性动词。 when 说明从句的动作和主句的动作可以是同时,也可以是先后发生;while 则强调主句的动作在从句动作的发生的过程中或主从句两个动作同时发生。故 while- when。
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13.A. relief      B. concern       C. injury          D. regret

14.A. emotions    B. replies       C. excuses         D. attitudes

15.A. caught       B. missed      C. took           D. delayed

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B. the leaves koalas eat are losing nutritional value

C. koalas cannot get enough water to drink

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