Question

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请你根据下面所给的提示描写中国的一个传统节日-----端午节。

1.龙舟节，也叫端午节，是在中国的农历五月初五这一天庆祝。它是中国一个传统的节日.多数中国家庭都庆祝这个节日; 2. 端午节节日起源； 3.庆祝活动：赛龙舟、吃粽子等。

农历  calendar      粽子  rice dumpling

注意：词数：100词左右。

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Answer

The Dragon Boat Festival

The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. It is such an important traditional festival in China that the festival is celebrated in most Chinese families.

The Dragon Boat festival is in memory of the death of a great patriotic Chinese poet, Qu Yuan, who is said to have killed himself in the river.

That day there will be a variety of activities. For example, dragon boat racing game, throwing rice dumplings into the river. People with family or friends get together for dinner as well. They usually eat some special food, rice dumplings. We Chinese will keep the hero poet in mind!

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文。本文要求考生根据提示介绍中国的传统节日—。文章使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1.龙舟节，也叫端午节，是在中国的农历五月初五这一天庆祝。它是中国一个传统的节日.多数中国家庭都庆祝这个节日; 2. 端午节节日起源； 3.庆祝活动：赛龙舟、吃粽子等。本文要点较为齐全，写作时要适当使用复合句整合各要点，使更为紧凑。

【名师点睛】

本篇范文很好的地完成了文字提示要求的任务，内容紧凑。所提建议有理有据，可执行性高。从写作技巧方面来看，作者使用了较多的高级句式，如状语从句：It is such an important traditional festival in China that the festival is celebrated in most Chinese families.定语从句....who is said to have killed himself in the river.同时文章的结构很合理，全文分为三段，条理清晰。这些技巧的运用，很好地增加了获得高分的可能性。

考点：考查提纲类作文