Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误仅限1词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Arthur,

In your last letter, you told me something about your sister’s surfing on the Internet. I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popular, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, and a serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parent? Poor scores? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.

Yours,

Colin

Answer

1.to改成with

2.play改成playing

3.and 改成but

4.at first去掉at,

5.make改成makes

6.parent改成parents

7.having改成have

8.herself改成her,

9.interesting改成interested

10.instead后面加of

【解析】

试题分析： 通过本文的阅读和改错，考查学生的固定搭配和时态和非谓语动词的用法、连词、冠词的区别等。

1. to改成with 考查固定搭配。be familiar with是搭配，意思是: 熟悉。所以把to改成with。

2.play改成playing 考查非谓语动词。cannot help doing的意思是：忍不住做某事。所以把play改成playing。

3.and 改成but 考查连词。这里是连词not only….but also，句意：玩网络游戏和聊天不仅浪费时间而且还会造成后患。also可以省略，所以把and 改成but。

4.at first去掉at 考查句意的理解。句意：你首先要做的是找到她产生网瘾的原因。first的意思是：首先，at first 的意思是：一开始。

5.5】make改成makes 考查主谓一致。what做主语相当于单数，所以谓语用单三形式makes。

6.6】 parent改成parents 考查名词复数。父母用复数形式parents。

7.7】 having改成have 考查祈使句。句意：然后和她谈一谈。这里是祈使句用动词原形，所以把having改成have。

8.8】herself改成her 考查代词。句意：你应该帮助她学习。所以把herself改成her。

9.9】interesting改成interested 考查形容词。让她对学习感兴趣。interesting有趣的；interested in 感兴趣于……；

10.instead后面加of 考查固定搭配。computer games是短语名词，前面用instead of。

考点：短文改错。