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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线(__), 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Angela,

I’m glad to hear the news you’ll come to Hangzhou for a visit. You know, Hangzhou is a beautiful city on the east coast of China. It is said that Marco Polo, a well-known Italy traveler once visited Hangzhou, and was striking by its beautiful scenery. Hangzhou is one of the oldest cities for a long history. It was the capital of several dynasty. As the result, it has a lot of famous temples and old towers. The West Lake, with green hills on three sides or many beautiful parks around, attracts a large number of visitors at home and at abroad. I think you’ll have a good time during our stay in Hangzhou. I’m looking forward to see you here soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

1.在the news 和 you之间加that 2.Italy--- Italian 3.striking--- struck 4.for--- with 5.dynasty--- dynasties 6.the--- a 7.or--- and 8.去掉and at abroad中的at 9.our--- your 10.see --- seeing 【解析】 试题分析:这是一篇回信,丽华给即将来杭州的Angela介绍杭州。 1.在the news 和 you之间加that the news后面是同位语从句,是the news的具体内容,此处缺少引导词,故在the news 和 you之间加that。 2.Italy--- Italian 句意:意大利的游客。形容词修饰名词,故把Italy--- Italian。 3.striking--- struck 句意:我被它的景色之美所打动。此处是被动语态,故把striking--- struck。 4.for--- with 句意:杭州是具有悠久历史的最古老的城市之一。with a long history具有悠久历史,故把for--- with。 5.dynasty--- dynasties several(几个),修饰可数名词复数,故把dynasty--- dynasties。 6.the--- a 固定词组:as a result结果,故把the--- a。 7.】or--- and 句意:三面有绿山和很多美丽的公园环抱。此处表示并列关系,故把 or--- and。 8.去掉and at abroad中的at 固定词组:at home and abroad在国内外,故去掉and at abroad中的at。 9.our--- your 句意:我认为你们在杭州期间玩的开心。故把our--- your。 10.see --- seeing 固定短语:look forward to doing sth“渴望做某事”,其中的to为介词,不是不定式符号.故把see --- seeing。 【知识拓展】 1.as a result结果;as a result of 由于---。As a result,he failed.结果他失败了。As a result of his carelessness,he didn’t pass the exam.由于他的粗心,他没有通过考试。 2.strike/touch/move打动、感动。What he said touched me deeply.他说的话深深打动了我。 3. to作介词讲时,后面常用名词、代词宾格和动名词。 the key to solving the problem 解决这个问题的关键;the road to success 通向成功的路;a trip to London 伦敦的一次旅行;a visit to Paris pay巴黎的一次访问;pay attention to 重视; object to反对;look forward to期盼。 考点:考查短文改错
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When we reached the Mall, I gave him the money and the smile   8. requested and added   9.  gentle pat on his back. He smiled back as if   10.  (give) me a receipt and I would preserve his smile for a long time.

 

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阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

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My sister bought me three wonderful gifts,   _________ only one would capture my heart forever. First she handed me the _________. Because Amy is careful with her actions, I knew this was her   _________ favourite. It was a bottle of perfume. I was happy with it, yet _________ as to what lay ahead. Next she handed me a box. After _________  away the wrapping paper, I found a stylish and expensive sweater. I was deeply moved that my sister was so _________  . Then she handed me the _________ gift. Judging by the familiar size and _________, I knew it was a CD. It was the soundtrack to the movie “Rocky”, with songs inspiring to all athletes, dreamers… I _________  loved it, but not as much as I would after what my sister explained to me.

She was _________ to a knee injury that _________  me half of my soccer season. I desired to be with my team-mates and _________  each minute I sat on the bench. I tried hard, hoping my knee injury would heal soon. This was what led my sister to buy that CD.

After mentioning what was behind the _________  , Amy played the CD for me. Even though I had heard those songs a thousand times, each note struck me as if it was   _________ . It played in my soul and on my emotions. I _________  breathlessly, as the words “Trying hard now. It’s so hard now” sounded through the room. It _________  me in a way beyond the happiness most gifts could bring. I couldn’t _________ crying and hugged my sister. Knowing that my sister had   _________ my problem so deeply made me realize that I am the _________ little sister in the world. I had never received a gift with so much _________ behind it! I’ll cherish it forever.

1.A. and           B. but          C. which       D. for

2.A. smallest       B. prettiest    C. dearest     D. largest

3.A. most           B. less        C. least       D. more

4.A. anxious      B. excited      C. delighted  D. curious

5.A. putting      B. tearing     C. carrying   D. giving

6.A. helpful      B. fashionable  C. rich       D. generous

7.A. rest           B. last       C. other      D. favourite

8.A. color         B. style        C. pattern     D. shape

9.A. immediately   B. quickly     C. suddenly   D. secretly

10.A. explaining   B. replying   C. referring   D. talking

11.A. paid         B. stopped     C. took       D. cost

12.A. enjoyed     B. valued      C. suffered  D. spent

13.A. gift         B. story       C. sweater     D. Christmas

14.A. alive       B. new         C. strange     D. familiar

15.A. listened     B. danced       C. laughed     D. remembered

16.A. harmed       B. helped      C. broke       D. touched

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18.A. found         B. got          C. felt      D. solved

19.A. luckiest      B. cleverest    C. bravest     D. best

20.A. hardship      B. thought      C. money       D. experience

 

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The games are based off Escape the Room video games, such as Crimson Room and QP-Shot, created by TAKAGISM Inc. by Toshimitsu Takagi in 2005, in which the player is locked inside a room and must explore his or her surroundings in order to escape.   1. Other inspirations include adventure board games and movies. Real-life room escape games are becoming popular in the United States, Japan, and China. 2. For example, some games require you escape prison cells while others require you escape space stations.

3. Soon, they were exported to North America, Asia and Australia. Examples include the two pioneer companies Hint Hunt and Adventure Rooms.

The games were so successful that new locations began opening up across China, in cities big and small, according to Want China Times. In the southern city of Shenzhen, for example, the first escape game location opened last August.   4. “These real-life escape games can help those who stay at home on their computers and iPads all day to experience real social circles,” Tian Xiaochuan, who owns two room escape game stores in Jinan, told Want China Times.

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F. Permanent real life escape games in a fixed location were first opened in Europe.

G. Players must be observant and use their critical thinking skills to escape the room.

 

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Each tunnel is roughly round and the lower part of the tunnel is somewhat flat .The surface of the road lies on the base, which is made of concrete and steel. The drainage system (排水系统), just below the road surface on one side, removes any extra liquid, particularly water. In the event of fire, the fire main, which is made of steel, pipes water to many fire hydrant stations at regular intervals along the length of the tunnel. The fire main is at the side of the tunnel, and at the level of the road surface. Other systems in the tunnel will include emergency phones .

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B.eight kilometers long and six metres wide

C.four kilometers long and twelve metres wide

D.four kilometers long and six metres wide

2.Which part of the tunnel in the diagram is used to pipe out extra water?

A. 1                B. 3                 C. 5               D  6

3.Driving in the tunnel , one can know the traffic conditions ahead through ________.

A.the lights           B.the electronic signs

C.the trucks and cars  D.the emergency phones

4.The passage is mainly about ________.

A.the construction of a road

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C.the construction of two tunnels

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Conversation is a turn-taking game. When our habits are similar, there's no problem. But if our habits are different, you may start to talk before I'm finished or fail to take your turn when I'm finished. That's what was happening with Betty and Sara.

It may not be coincidental that Betty, who expected relatively longer pauses between turns, is British, and Sara, who expected relatively shorter pauses, is American. Betty often felt interrupted by Sara. But Betty herself became an interrupter and found herself doing most of the talking when she met a visitor from Finland. And Sara had a hard time cutting in on some speakers from Latin America or Israel.

The general phenomenon, then, is that the small conversation techniques, like pacing and pausing, lead people to draw conclusions not about conversational style but about personality and abilities. These habitual differences are often the basis for dangerous stereotyping (思维定式). And these social phenomena can have very personal consequences. For example, a woman from the southwestern part of the US went to live in an eastern city to take up a job in personnel. When the Personnel Department got together for meetings, she kept searching for the right time to break in and never found it. Although back home she was considered outgoing and confident, in Washington she was viewed as shy and retiring. When she was evaluated at the end of the year, she was told to take a training course because of her inability to speak up.

That's why slight differences in conversational style – tiny little things like microseconds of pause – can have a great effect on one's life. The result in this case was a judgment of psychological problems – even in the mind of the woman herself, who really wondered what was wrong with her and registered for assertiveness training.

1.What did Sara think of Betty when talking with her?

A. Betty was talkative.

B. Betty was an interrupter.

C. Betty did not take her turn.

D. Betty paid no attention to Sara.

2.According to the passage, who are likely to expect the shortest pauses between turns?

A. Americans.         B. Israelis.

C. The British.       D. The Finns.

3.We can learn from the passage that _________.

A. communication breakdown results from short pauses and fast pacing

B. women are unfavorably stereotyped in eastern cities of the US

C. one's inability to speak up is culturally determined sometimes

D. one should receive training to build up one's confidence

4.The underlined word "assertiveness" in the last paragraph probably means ________.

A. being willing to speak one's mind

B. being able to increase one's power

C. being ready to make one's own judgment

D. being quick to express one's ideas confidently

 

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