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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream was put forward by President Xi .And others talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I had always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I can try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequate for the job of a doctor.

I believe hard work is that it takes to accomplish my goal.

 

1.inspired改为inspiring 2.删除was或在was前面加which/that 3.his改为their 4.had改为have 5.life改为lives 6.without改为with 7.can改为must 8.can后加to 9.adequate改为adequately 10.that改为what 【解析】 试题分析:本文记叙了我们班级进行的“我的中国梦”的讨论,我的梦想是进入医科大学,未来治病救人。 1.1】inspired改为inspiring 考查形容词。现在分词转换而来的形容词“inspiring鼓舞人心的”通常修饰事物。所以本句中该词做定语修饰名词短语Chinese Dream。 2.删除was或在was前面加which/that 考查句子结构。删除was后,过去分词短语put forward by President Xi作为定语修饰Chinese Dream;在was后加that/which,就变成定语从句that/which was put forward by President Xi修饰先行词“Chinese Dream”。 3.3】his改为their 考查代词。本句主语“others其他人”是复数名词,所以本句中使用their指代others。 4.had改为have 考查时态。原句中过去完成时表示过去某个动作之前就已经完成的动作,而本句并没有说明是在过去的过去发生的事情,使用现在完成时“have wanted....”表示我一直都想.....。 5.life改为lives 考查名词单复数。本句中名词“life生命”是可数名词,前面的名词people是复数形式,所以也应该使用复数形式“lives”。 6.without改为with 考查介词。句意:医生可以使用他们的专业知识帮助人们过更好的生活。根据句意可知使用肯定句。所以原句否定意义的介词without要改为with。 7.can改为must 考查上下文串联。本句中must与后句中must形成对应;句意:为了实现我的梦想,从现在开始我必须努力学习。 8.8】can后加to 考查不定式。本句中不定式to get into a good medical college做目的状语。句意:为了进入一所好的医科大学,我必须学习我能够学到的尽可能多的知识。 9.adequate改为adequately 考查副词。副词在句中通常做状语修饰形容词、副词或动词,形容词通常做定语修饰名词或代词。本句中副词adequately做状语修饰谓语动词prepare myself for the job of a doctor。 10.that改为what 考查表语从句。本句中what引导表语从句,并在句中作为动词take的宾语。 【名师点睛】 高考短文改错考点层次一般而言可依次分为词法的测试、句法的测试和语篇的测试三个层面。考点层次越高,就越能测试出考生运用语言的能力。低层次的考点往往侧重于语法方面的考查,而高层次的考点往往侧重于考生对文章意义方面的理解。 一、词法改错 词法的测试包括:定冠词和不定冠词的用法;名词的单复数和名词的所有格;动词的时态、语态、语气,情态动词和非谓语动词等;人称代词、人称代词的格、物主代词、指示代词、连接代词、不定代词等的用法;介词的搭配;并列连词、从属连词的用法;形容词、副词的区别以及比较级和最高级的用法;固定搭配和习惯用法。 例如:本题中的11.inspired改为inspiring 考查形容词。 12.life改为lives 考查名词单复数。 13.without改为with 考查介词 14.can后加to 考查不定式 15.adequate改为adequately 考查副词 二、句法改错 句法的测试包括:主谓语在数上的一致性;名词性从句、定语从句和强调句;句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性和逻辑性。 例如:16.删除was或在was前面加which/that 考查句子结构 17.that改为what 考查表语从句 三、语篇改错 语篇的测试包括:上下文的时态是否一致;上下文中的代词指代是否一致;上下文中的逻辑关系是否一致。 18.his改为their 考查代词。 19.had改为have 考查时态。 20.can改为must 考查上下文串联 考点:考查短文改错
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