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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Being responsible is actually not that difficult. I used to think it is hard to grow up into a responsible member of our society. An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed my attitude. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light while a girl was knocked down by passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately gave his first aid and I had joined in without hesitation. Soon many help was given to the girl. Because we sent her to the nearest hospitals in time, she was able to receive properly treatment. Not badly injured, I expressed gratitude to those giving help. Compared with the escaping driver, I was proud of what I did.

 

1.第二句is改成was 2.in---on 3.while---when 4.by后加a 5.去掉had 6.many---much 7.hospitals---hospital 8.properly---proper 9.I---she 10.escaping---escaped 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于记叙文,讲述了作者帮助一位被汽车撞倒的女生的故事,告诉我们要有责任感。 1. 考查时态。本句是一个主从复合句,主句中I used to think....说明这是我过去的看法,所以使用一般过去时。 2. 考查介词。在特定的某一个下午,使用介词on,而不是in。介词on a rainy Sunday afternoon在一个下雨的星期天下午。 3. 考查连词。固定句式be doing sth when....正在做某事在这时....(发生意料之外的事情);本句中的when是并列连词,意为“在这时,在那时” 4. 考查不定冠词。本句中的car是一个可数名词,且本句是单数形式,在前面加不定冠词a表示泛指。短语a passing car一辆经过的汽车。 5. 考查时态。一个男人立刻对女孩进行急救,我毫不犹豫地参加。这两件事几乎同时发生,所以要使用相同的一般过去时。 6. 考查形容词。本句中的名词help是一个不可数名词,而many修饰可数名词复数形式,much修饰不可数名词。 7. 考查名词单复数。最近的医院只有一所,所以使用单数名词hospital。 8. 考查形容词。在英语中使用形容词做定语修饰名词,副词通常在句中作状语修饰形容词、副词或动词。所以本句中的形容词proper修饰名词treatment,指“适当的治疗”。 9. 考查代词。根据上文可知被撞的是一个女孩,所以使用人称代词she指代这个女孩。 10. 考查形容词。现在分词转换的形容词通常修饰事物,过去分词转换的形容词常常修饰人。本句中名词driver司机,由形容词escaped修饰。 【名师点睛】 本文11. 1. be (just) about to do... when... She was just about to say something more when she noticed the sullen look on his face. 她刚要再说些什么,却突然看到了他阴沉的脸色。 2. be (just) on the point of doing sth ... when... They were on the point of giving up when the captain encouraged them fiercely to save the ship. 就在他们快要放弃努力时, 船长鼓励他们竭尽全力挽救轮船。 3. be going to do ... when ... He was going to run away, when the policemen came. 他正打算逃跑, 警察突然出现了。 She was going to open the window and shout at the dog to frighten it, when she stopped and stood quite still. 她正准备打开窗户,大声吓唬一下那条狗,这时她突然停住了,站着一动也不动。 4. be doing sth ... when ... The children are playing football on the playground, when it began to rain. 孩子们正在操场上踢足球,突然下起了大雨。 5. be busy doing ... when ... I was busy doing my homework when one of my classmates came. 我正忙着做作业,这时我的一个同学来找我。 I was busy cooking when there was a knock at the door. 我正在忙着做饭,突然听到了敲门的声音。 6. had (just) done ... when ... I had just gone to bed after a very hard day when the phone rang. 在劳累了一天之后, 我刚要上床睡觉,这时电话响了。 7. had not done ... when ... I hadn't walked a few steps when I realized that he asked for the direction to my office building. 我还没走出去几步远, 突然意识到他问的是去办公大楼的方向。 The students hadn't played basketball long when the bell rang. 学生们没玩多长时间篮球, 铃就响了。 8. be + 介词短语 + when... The mother and the seven-year-old were inside the house when the shooting occurred. 这位母亲和她7岁的孩子正在家里的时候, 发生了枪击事件。 They were at work in the office that afternoon when a big fire broke out. 那天下午他们正在办公室工作,就在这时一场大火发生了。 We were on duty in the classroom when a boy rushed in. 我们正在教室里值日,就在这时一名男孩冲了进来。 考点:考查记叙文阅读
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阅读下面短文,按照句子结构的语法性和上下文连贯的要求,在空格处填入一个适当的词或使用括号中词语的正确形式填空,并将答案填在答题卡标号为1-10的相应位置上。

Keeping a diary in English is one of the effective ways   1.  (improve) our English writing ability.

Compared with other forms of writing, it is shorter and takes 2.  (little) time. It can help us to develop the habit of thinking in English. If we persist (坚持) in this practice, gradually we’ll learn how to express ourselves in English. In keeping a diary in English, we certainly run up against many   3.  (difficult). Firstly, it often happens that we have trouble   4.  (find) appropriate words and phrases to give expression to our mind. Secondly, there   5.  (be) many idiomatic ways of saying things in Chinese. And it is extremely hard for us to put them into English 6.  (proper).

As far as I am concerned, my suggestion is 7.  we should always have a notebook and a Chinese-English dictionary within easy reach. Whenever something beats us, we can first put it down in our notebook and then consult our dictionary. We can also ask our English teacher   8.  help, if necessary. In short, I believe that it is  9.  great use to keep a diary in English for the 10.  (develop) of our writing skills.

 

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阅读下面短文,掌握其大意,然后从各题所给的四个选项(A.B.C和D)中选可以填入空白处的最佳选项。

I got aboard and sat down in my seat.It was going to be a long flight. Around me were some ________ "Where are you headed?" I asked.

"Lakes Air Base.We'll be there for special training, and then to the front."

After about an hour, an announcement was made that box lunches were ________ for five dollars. The journey would be several hours, and I decided to buy one.

As I ________ for my wallet, I heard a soldier ask his fellows if he would buy lunch."No, that seems a lot of money for just a box lunch." I looked around at the other soldiers.________ were buying lunch.I walked to the back of the plane and________ the flight attendant a fifty-dollar bill.

"Take a lunch to all those soldiers." I said.She seized my arms tightly.Her eyes wet with tears, she ________ me, " My son is a soldier in the front...it's almost like you are doing it for him."

Picking up ten boxes, she headed to the soldiers.

After eating, on my way to the rest room I was  ________  by a man."I saw ________ you did and I want to be part of it." With this, he handed me twenty-five dollars.

Soon after I returned to my seat, I saw the Flight Captain coming, looking at the seat numbers  ________ he walked.When he got to my row he stopped, smiled, held out his ________ , and said, "I want to ________ your hand." I stood and took his hand.With a loud voice he said, "I was a soldier.________ , someone bought me a lunch.It was such an act of________that I never forgot." I was a little bit________ when applause rang out from all of the passengers.These soldiers were giving their all for our country.I could only give them a couple of meals.

Later, when I walked to the front of the plane to stretch my legs, a man ________ another twenty-five dollars in my hand.

When we________ , I gathered my belongings and started to leave.A man stopped me, put something in my pocket, and walked away ________ a word.Another twenty-five dollars! Seeing the soldiers  ________ at the terminal, I walked over to them and handed them seventy-five dollars.As I walked   ________to my car, I prayed for their safe ________ .

1.A.strangers      B.soldiers      C.attendants    D.passengers

2.A.available      B.reasonable   C.convenient    D.special

3.A.prepared     B.sent          C.reached       D.paid

4.A.None          B.Some         C.Many         D.All

5.A.lent         B.showed       C.handed        D.charged

6.A.advised        B.greeted     C.inspired      D.thanked

7.A.praised       B.stopped      C.attracted     D.discovered

8.A.how            B.which        C.what         D.that

9.A.as             B.though        C.till         D.unless

10.A.tongue        B.arm         C.head          D.hand

11.A.feel          B.seize         C.Shake        D.check

12.A.Once          B.Later         C.Recently      D.Frequently

13.A.performance  B.kindness     C.bravery       D.wisdom

14.A.embarrassed  B.relieved    C.overjoyed    D.satisfied

15.A.threw         B.found         C.took         D.left

16.A.separated    B.landed        C.paused        D.chatted

17.A.in            B.for         C.through      D.without

18.A.training      B.shouting      C.gathering     D.marching

19.A.casually      B.Anxiously   C. disappointedlyD.lightheartedly

20.A.arrival     B.return        C.flight        D.Escape

 

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根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项,选项中有两项为多余选项。

In many countries of the world, people do what is called house sitting.It means that if owners of the house are going away, they want someone to come into their home and look after the house and maybe pets while they are away.

In Australia, many people travel.After people retire, they might buy a van and travel all over the country. 1. 

So if someone wants to travel or go away for some reason, they might want someone in their home to care for it and keep the gardens tidy.House sitters might have to care for pets.Also, quite a few people have swimming pools in their back yard and they need cleaning.  2.   I feel it is a great way of seeing the country, because you go and stay in a new city, get to meet new people, and have time to go sightseeing in a new area.

3.   .There are websites where you find the advertisements by people who want to travel, and by replying to the advertisement, you can make arrangements to go and look after their home.

There are some requirements to be a house sitter.You must be a trusted person, so that the home owner knows you will not steal anything.You must be able to go when the house owner wants you to go, so you need lots of free time.   4.   .You need to be good with pets, able to care for cats and dogs, or other pets they may have.

Some house sitting jobs are just for a few days or a couple of weeks while the house owners have a short holiday.Sometimes it is for much longer.We have had one house sit for six months, while the home owner travelled to Europe.

5.  . Then you can travel to many different countries and stay there.One of the important things to get is references from the home owners where you have stayed. A reference is a written letter to say that you are trustworthy and have looked after their home well.You can show these letters to possible house sitting jobs and they know you will do a good job.

A. I have done house sitting many times.

B. Thousands of people do this all the time.

C. It is also possible to do house sitting in other countries.

D. Generally you have many opportunities to get a house sitting job.

E. You must take a little care over what your description says about you.

F. This is an international house sitting service for all city and country areas.

G. You must have a good car, so you can travel to different parts of the country.

 

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When it comes to cultural heritage protection, the Grand Canal of China is probably the world’s greatest project of its kind.  The big inland waterway system in the north-eastern and central eastern plains passes through eight of the country’s present-day provinces.

The Canal runs from Beijing in the north to Zhejiang Province in the south. Constructed in sections from the 5th century BC onwards, it was designed as a means of communication in the 7th century AD.  The Canal is the world’s greatest civil engineering project before the Industrial Revolution.

The Grand Canal reached a peak in the 13th century, providing an inland navigation(航行) network consisting of more than 2,000 kilometers of artificial waterways, linking five of the most important river basins in China, including the Yellow River and the Yangtze. It entered a bid as a UNESCO(联合国教科文组织) cultural heritage site in 2008.

The Grand Canal cultural square is located in Beijing’s Tongzhou district. Ever since the Yuan dynasty 800 years ago, the Tongzhou section of the Grand Canal has been the life blood of Beijing. Grain and building materials were all transported to meet the endless demands of the big cities. Even today, the Grand Canal plays a major role in the lives of its citizens.

"I grew up near the Grand Canal. In the past the waterway was a lot narrower, but now it’s nice and wide and bridges are built over it. I think if the bid for world heritage status succeeds, it will greatly make Tongzhou more famous in the world, especially with Tongzhou aiming to be a sub-center of the capital Beijing," a citizen said.

The result of the bid is set to be released next week, and no doubt it will certainly make it into the history books if the Canal is listed as a world heritage site.

1.It can be concluded from the passage that ________ .

A. The bid’s result of the Canal will be announced soon

B. the Canal is the UNESCO’s newest world heritage site

C. the Canal is to connect Tongzhou with Zhejiang Province

D. the Canal will be a bid for a UNESCO cultural heritage site

2.The Grand Canal was in the most glorious time ________ .

A. when it was aimed as a means of communication

B. when it crossed the Yellow River and the Yangtze

C. when it was born about six hundred years later

D. when it was designed as an artificial waterway

3.What can we infer by reading the passage?

A. Tongzhou used to be the capital of the Yuan dynasty.

B. Most citizens living in Tongzhou depend on the Canal.

C. Tongzhou will benefit if the Canal is made a heritage site.

D. Some citizens think the Canal not to be a cultural heritage item.

 

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With brown curly hair and a pair of glasses, 19-year-old Nicholas Allegra from New York state, US, looks like a real-life Harry Potter. However, rather than waving a wand, Nicholas is a "wizard " at "jailbreaking ". This is probably why he ended up with an intern­ship at Apple, a job many of his fellow Brown University students dream of.

Jailbreaking is the process of removing the limitations set by Apple on devices with the iOS oper­ating system. These devices include the iPhone, iPod Touch, and iPad. It allows users to gain full access to the operating system and download additional  materials that are unavailable through the official Apple App Store. However, it is estimated that Apple loses $100 million (640million yuan) from jailbreaking each year.

Nicholas, with a famous nickname "Comex", is the teenage hacker behind the jail-breaking site JailbreakMe. com. The site tells users how to unlock their iPhones using software that is not approved by Apple. The jailbreaking software he made has been downloaded millions of times by users around the world.

Then Forbes magazine suggested in an article that Apple's security team might need him as a new intern. It seems that they do. Little more than a day after Steve jobs stepped down as CEO, Apple welcomed Nicholas Allegra. Nicholas wrote on his Twitter on August 26 that " It's been really, really fun, but it's also been a while and I've been getting bored. So, the week after next I will be starting an internship with Apple.

Apple is not the only company embracing the skills of hackers. Facebook recently hired iPhone jailbreaker George "Geohot" Hotz as a full-time employee.

However, there are still hot debates about whether employing hackers is a wise solution. The word "hacker" has always had a double meaning. In the press, "hacker" means someone who breaks into computers. They steal from people's bank ac­counts, download sensitive information and attack legal websites. Among computer lovers, it means a cool pro­grammer who can make a computer do whatever he wants.

Hiring a hacker does have its advantages. A talented hacker is probably quite capable of finding problems and suggesting corrections. On the other hand, because of a hacker's former behavior, many people doubt their morals .Can the company trust them with its valuable assets ? And can someone who is so used to working alone in the dark fit into a new role within a company?

One thing is for sure- Comex isn't the first member of the hacker community to land the job of his dreams. It's likely that he won't be the last.

1.What did Nicolas Allegra do before working for Apple?

A. He was a wizard.

B. He designed software for Apple.

C. He ran an Apple app store.

D. He set up JailbreakMe. com.

2.According to the article, jailbreaking _______.

A. enables iPhone users to access more functions on their phones

B. doesn't cause much financial loss to Apple

C. destroys the operating system of Apple products

D. helps promote Apple products around the world

【小题3 The underlined word "embracing" in Paragraph 5 is closest in meaning to

A. praising         B. Preventing

C. accepting         D. protesting

3.Some people think it unwise to hire hackers because they _______.

A. are likely to quit their job very quickly

B. are not reliable and adaptable enough

C. lack professional problem solving skills

D. are used to working at night rather than in the daytime

 

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