Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改l0处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I just come back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28. We paid a visit to many places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there.

Answer

1.come改为came

2.luckily改为lucky

3.student改为students

4.or改为and

5.where改为which

6.much改为many

7.was后加a

8.they改为we

9.excited改为exciting

10.删除the

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于记叙文，叙述了作者在英国的学习经历以及个人感受。

1.come改为came 考查时态。本句的时间状语是last week，这是一个过去时的时间状语，所以谓语动词使用过去式came。

2.luckily改为lucky 考查形容词。在英语中通常使用形容词做表语，副词通常做状语。所以本句中用形容词lucky放在系动词was的后面做表语。

3.student改为students 考查名词单复数。短语“one of...”的后面要接可数名词复数形式。所以本句只有复数形式students。

4.or改为and 考查连词。在肯定句中使用and连接并列成分，在否定句通常使用or表示并列关系。我们参观了很多对方，像伦敦，牛津和湖区。

5.where改为which 考查定语从句。本题定语从句中中系动词was前面的是主语，而关系副词where不能在句中作主语，只能做状语。只有关系代词才可以在句中做主语。本句中关系代词which指代先行词British culture and history在句中做主语，引导非限制性定语从句。

6.much改为many 考查形容词。本句中使用many修饰可数名词复数形式buildings；而much通常修饰不可数名词。

7.was后加a 考查冠词。本句中名词pity是一个可数名词，意为“遗憾的事情”，前面使用a修饰，泛指一件令人遗憾的事情。句意：遗憾的是我们在那里的时候，雨下得很大。

8.they改为we 考查代词。本文叙述的是作者在英国的经历，所以是“我们在那里”，而不是“他们在那里”。

9.excited改为exciting 考查形容词。形容词excited感到兴奋的，推测修饰人；exciting令人兴奋的，推测修饰事物。

10.

【名师点睛】

本文11.

1 专有名词、物质名词、抽象名词、人名、地名等名词前，一般不加冠词。

China, America, Smith，Air, water and light are all matter.

2 可数名词前有物主代词、指示代词、名词所有格等限制时，不加冠词。

This dictionary is mine.

3 季节、月份、星期、节日、假日、一日三餐名称前一般不加冠词。

March, May Day, National Day, Children’s Day, Women’s Day ，Father's Day,

Have you had breakfast ?

Spring is the best season of the year.

4 称呼语或指家用雇用的nurse、cook等名词前及表示头衔职务的名词作宾语、补语及同位语时，一般不加冠词。

What’s this, Father? We made him our chairman.

Ask nurse to put the child to bed. Professor Li.

5 学科名称、球类、棋类名称前不加冠词。

Do you study physics?

He likes playing football/chess.

6 复数名词表示泛指一类人或事物时前不用冠词。

They are peasants/ workers.

7 在与by连用的交通工具名称前不加冠词。

by car, by bus,by bike, by train, by air/ water/ land

但：take a bus, come in a boat, on the train/ bus需注意。

8 某些固定词组中不用冠词。

(1) 名词词组中：

husband and wife, brother and sister, body and soul, day and night, knife and fork

(2) 介词词组中：

to(at, from) school, in (to)class, in (to,at, from)university（college）,to（in, into, from）church, to(in,into, out of)prison(hospital, bed), to(at, from, out of)work, to(in, from) town, at (from)home, to(at)sea, at night(noon, midnight), by car (bus, bicycle, plane), on foot

注意：在有些词组中，有无冠词含义不同。

in hospital 住院（因病）

in the hospital 在医院（工作、参观等）

in front of 在前面，指某物体之外

in the front of 在前部，指某物之内

in charge of 负责，主管

in the charge of 由……负责

out of question 没问题

out of the question 不可能

9 as引导的让步状语从句中，作表语的名词不带冠词。

Child as she is, she knows a lot of French.

10 系动词turn（作“变成”解）后作表语的单数可数名词前习惯不用冠词。

The young girl has turned writer.

= The young girl has become a writer.

11 在“单数名词 + after + 单数名词”（“一个接一个”）的结构中，单数可数名词前不加冠词。

She did experiment after experiment.

类似的还有：shop after shop, mistake after mistake

12 形容词的最高级前、序数词前也有不用定冠词的情况。

(1)“most + 形容词原级”作“十分、非常、极”解时，前面不用定冠词。

Oh, it’s most beautiful.

(2) 当两个形容词最高级并列修饰同一个名词时，第二个形容词前通常不用定冠词。

She is the tallest and fattest girl in our school.

(3) 当形容词最高级作表语，不表示与其他人或物相比时，其前不用定冠词。

The market in the country is busiest in winter.

(4) 形容词最高级前有名词所有格或物主代词时，不能用定冠词。

A wolf in a sheep’s skin is our most dangerous enemy.

(5)序数词前面一般加定冠词表示“第……”之意，但在second、third等词前加不定冠词表示“又一，再一”之意。

a second; a third; a fourth; a fifth; a sixth; a seventh; an eighth

注意：下句中“a first”表示“第一名、冠军”。

He is a top student in our class, he often gets a first in maths.

13 no与such连用时应放在such之前，such后面的名词不用冠词。

No such thing has ever happened in this village.

14 never、ever置于作主语的名词前，这些名词前不用冠词。

Never did student study so hard.这个学生从未学得这么认真。

15 有时为了节省空间、时间、金钱和精力，或为了引起注意力，省去a(n)或the,这主要用于新闻标题、工商业文件、广告、电报、公告、提纲、书名等。

Conference opens.会议召开了。

16 单数或复数名词表泛指，其前不用冠词。

Paper can be made from wood or other materials.

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