Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词.

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉.

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The students union will organize an activity when we can exchange items we don't need with others. If you are interested it, you can join in between three and six on Saturday afternoon on the Central Road in our school. As it is known to all, many of us have difficulty deal with used things that mean little to us. If you take it there, not only can you get anything you want, but you can also help others. Beside, it will be a good chance to communicate and make new friend. Any used items is welcome, such as used books, shoes, watches and so on. The more, the good.

Answer

1.when改为where

2.interested后加in

3.As it is known to all中 it删掉

4.deal改为dealing

5.take后it改为them

6.anything改为something

7.Beside改为Besides

8.friend改为friends

9.item改为items或者 is改为are

10.good改为better

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于说明文，介绍了学生会组织的旧货交易会的具体信息。

1.when改为where 考查定语从句。本题定语从句的先行词是an activity，关系副词where引导定语从句，在句中作状语，相当于in which。关系副词when的先行词通常是表示时间的名词。

2.interested后加in 考查固定搭配。短语be interested in...对...感兴趣；句意：如果你对这件事情感兴趣。代词it作为介词in的宾语。

3.As it is known to all中it删掉 考查句子结构。本句中as指代后面一句话的内容，在句中做主语，不能省略。所以句中的it是多余的，要删除。

4.】deal改为dealing 考查动名词。固定结构have difficulty (in) doing sth做某事有困难，其中的in可以省略。

5.take后it改为them 考查代词。本句中的them指代可数名词复数used things。代词it指代单数名词或不可数名词。

6.anything改为something 考查代词。不定代词anything通常用于疑问句和否定句中，something通常用于肯定句中，而本句是一个肯定句，所以使用something。如果你把用过的东西带来，你不仅可以得到你想要的东西，而且还可以帮助他人。

7.Beside改为Besides 考查副词。本句中beside是介词，因为“在...旁边”，副词besides而且；本句中使用besides表示递进关系。如果你把用过的东西带来，你不仅可以得到你想要的东西，而且还可以帮助他人。而且，这还是一个与人交流并交到新朋友的好机会。

8.friend改为friends 考查固定搭配。短语make friends交朋友，其中要使用复数名词friends。

9.】item改为items或者is改为are 考查主谓一致。本句中item和系动词be的形式要一致，要么都使用单数形式，要么都使用复数形式。

10.good改为better 考查比较级。固定句式：“The+比较级，the+比较级”越...就越....；句意：越多越好。

【名师点睛】

本文11.

1： as引导限定性定语从句，常用于以下句式，其中关系代词在从句中担当主、宾、表语：

① so/as/such+名词+as…像……一样的，像……之类 :

We have found such materials as are used in their factory.

These houses are sold at such a low price as people expected. (00上海)

This book is not such as I expect.

Such things as you described are rare now. (四校联考)

He isn't such a man as you described.

He is such a lazy man as nobody wants to work with =he is such a lazy man that nobody wants to work with him. I want to have such a dictionary as he has.

I have bought such a watch as was advertised on TV.

Mount Wuyi is such an attractive place of interest as everyone likes to visit.

Such money as he earned was spent on spirits and tobacco. He was not half such a coward as we took him for.

② the same +名词+as 和……同样的 :

He is not the same man as he was /used to be.

The west is not the same as it was 20 years ago.

I like the same book as you do .

I shall do it in the same way as you did.

This is the same pen as I lost yesterday.

Is this the same mosquito as bit you just now?

2: as引导的非限定性定语从句，指代整个主句的内容，但不同于which的是，它引导的定语从句既可以位于主句的前面，也可以位于主句的后面。它的意思是“正如”，在这些从句中as作主语或宾语。经常使用的短语：

as(it) seems likely, as (it) often happens, as (it) was printed out, as (it) was said earlier,

as I remember (it), as I understand (it), as (it) appears, as is known,

as is said, as is reported, as announced, as we had expected,

as everybody can see, as is mentioned above.

如： As we all know, china is a developing country.. (在句首只能使用as)

As is known to all, he is the best student in our class.

As was expected, he failed in the exam.

As anybody can see, they were telling a lie.

The girl married a rich man, as is natural.

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