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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

 

1.waited后加for 2.past改为passed 3.feet改为foot 4.when改为than 5.a改为the 6.other改为another 7.do改为did 8.possible改为possibly 9.删除it 10.lose改为losing 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于记叙文,用作者的亲身故事告诉我们耐心的重要性。 1.waited后加for 考查固定搭配。短语wait for等待,等候;其中的wait是不及物动词,后面要接介词,然后再加宾语。 2.past改为passed 考查谓语动词。句中的past不是动词,而是介词,介词是不能在英语中做谓语的。应该使用另外一个同音的动词pass的过去式passed。 3.feet改为foot 考查介词短语。短语on foot步行;其中foot应该使用单数形式。句意:我决定步行前往。 4.when改为than 考查固定句式。句式no sooner ...than...一...就....;我一走开,公交车就到了。when应该和hardly连用,形成hardly...when....的结构,同样意为“一...就....”。 5.a改为the 考查冠词。本句中名词bus前面有next修饰,说明表示特指,应该使用定冠词the。 6.other改为another 考查固定用法。形容词another放在数词之前,表示“再...又....”,句意:如果我选择等待下一班公交车,我得再等30分钟。 7.do改为did 考查时态。本文讲述的是过去所发生的事情,所以通篇都使用一般过去时。本句要把do改为did。 8.possible改为possibly 考查副词。在英语中通常使用副词做状语修饰形容词、副词或动词;形容词通常在句中做定语或者表语。所以本句中使用副词possibly修饰动词waste all the effort。 9.删除it 考查句中结构。本题是一个定语从句,关系代词that指代先行词all the effort作为动词put的宾语,所以代词it是多余的,要删除掉。 10. 【名师点睛】 短文改错中除了词法的错误之外,我们还要注意句法和语篇的测试: (一)句法的测试: 1主谓语在数上的一致; I hope everything are ok with you. are 改为is 2名词性从句; A man came up to him and asked that he needed. that是连词,在从句中无任何意义,而后面的宾语从句缺宾语,用what引导宾语从句作宾语从句的宾语。 3定语从句; This would save the life of many animals, some of then have almost died out. them改为 which 11. 考查句中结构。本题是一个定语从句,关系代词that指代先行词all the effort作为动词put的宾语,所以代词it是多余的,要删除掉。 4强调句型;It is/was +被强调的部分+that/who… It was in 1949 when he joined the army. when改为that 5句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性及逻辑性。 (二)语篇的测试 语篇的测试包括: 1上下文中的时态是否一致; 12. 考查时态。本文讲述的是过去所发生的事情,所以通篇都使用一般过去时。本句要把do改为did。 2上下文中的代词是否一致; 3上下文中的逻辑是否一致; 4上下文中的词、词组、从句的替代是否正确。 考点:考查短文改错
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