Question

书面表达

假定你是李华，你在上周日搭坐102号公交车，该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很愤怒。于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信。要点如下：

1. 司机的不文明行为(大声讲话、紧急刹车、态度粗鲁等)。

2. 希望尽快查清此事。

注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer

Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua. I am writing to complain about one of your bus-drivers’ improper and rude behaviors.

Last Sunday, I was taking the No. 102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast. So some passengers advised him to concentrate on driving, but he didn’t pay any attention. What’s worse, he drove even faster. Then another passenger couldn’t bear it, asking the driver to keep the passengers’ safety in mind. But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance. However, he didn’t apologize but said rudely “It’s none of your business.”

I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查应用文写作。本文属于应用文中的书信，要求以李华的身份项公交车公司写投诉信，投诉该公司司机的不文明行为。所以本文使用第一人称和一般过去时为主的时态，在叙述司机的不文明行为时使用过去时，在方便个人看法的时候使用一般现在时。文章要点：1.叙述写信目的：投诉司机不文明行为。2.具体阐述司机的不文明行为：大声讲话、紧急刹车、态度粗鲁等。以及乘客的反应。3. 希望尽快查清此事。所以文章要分成三部分，每个要点为一部分。重点要放在第二部分上。同时要书信的格式和过渡句。

【名师点睛】

本篇范文很好地完成了题目所有要求，涵盖了要求的所有要点，同时篇章结构合理。文章的亮点在于高级句式的使用，如定语从句I was taking the No. 102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast.分词做状语用法：Then another passenger couldn’t bear it, asking the driver to keep the passengers’ safety in mind.同时文章中的高级短语使用也比较多，如take some measures to do sth采取措施做某事；none of your business和你无关；在阐述司机的粗鲁行为时，串联成分使用也很多，如what's more等。

考点：考查应用文写作