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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Frank joined the army after middle school. He did quite well in everything besides shooting. One day, the new soldiers were practiced shooting. Frank performed poorly while the rest was doing quite well. After he had shot at the target nine times but had not hit once, the officer shouted, “I had never seen such a fool! Don’t waste away your last bullet! Go behind that wall and shoot yourself with it!” Frank went behind a wall, and a few seconds late the sound of a shot was heard by the officer and the other soldier. “Heavens!” the officer said. Has that silly man real done so?” He ran behind the wall anxiously, only find Frank standing there straight, saying, I’m sorry, but I missed again.”

 

1.besides 改成 except 2.practiced改成 practicing 3.was 改成 were 4.Had 改成have 5.把away 删掉 6.a改成the 7.late改成later 8.soldier改成soldiers 9.real改成really 10.only和find 之间加to 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于记叙文,讲述了Frank中学毕业以后去当兵,在射击训练这一项上表现很糟糕。 1.besides 改成 except 考查介词。介词besides除...之外(包括在内);except除...之外(不包括在内);句意:除了射击,他所有方面都很好。根据下文可知他的射击不好,也就是没有被包括在本句的everything之内,所以使用except。 2.practiced改成 practicing 考查语态。本句中主语the new soldiers与动词practice构成主动关系,所以使用过去进行时的主动形式。 3.was 改成 were 考查主谓一致。本句的主语是the rest,指代其余的soldiers,当the rest指代可数名词复数的时候,谓语动词使用复数形式。 4.ad 改成have 考查时态。本句是一个直接引语,军官说:我从来没有见过这样一个傻瓜。在直接引语中使用现在完成时,表示到说话的时候已经完成的动作。 5.把away 删掉 考查动词。动词waste浪费,这是一个及物动词,后面直接加宾语,介词away是多余的。 6.a改成the 考查冠词。在英语中常常使用定冠词the表示特指,本句中使用the修饰wall,特指前面一句中提到的that wall。 7.late改成later 考查副词用法。副词later与一段时间连用,表示“一段时间以后”,句意:几秒钟以后,军官听见了一声枪响。 8. Soldier改成soldiers 考查名词单复数。本句表示军官和其余的士兵都听到了一声枪响,而根据第三句可知很多新兵在一起训练,所以使用复数形式。 9.real改成really 考查副词。在英语中通常使用副词做状语修饰动词,使用本句中使用really修饰谓语动词has done so。形容词real通常在句中充当定语或者表语,不能做状语。 10.only和find 之间加to 考查不定式用法。不定式常常和only连用,表示意料之外的结果。句意:他焦急地跑到墙后面,结果却发现Frank还站在那里说:对不起,我又打偏了。 【名师点睛】 高考短文改错考点层次一般而言可依次分为词法的测试、句法的测试和语篇的测试三个层面。考点层次越高,就越能测试出考生运用语言的能力。低层次的考点往往侧重于语法方面的考查,而高层次的考点往往侧重于考生对文章意义方面的理解。 一、词法改错 词法的测试包括:定冠词和不定冠词的用法;名词的单复数和名词的所有格;动词的时态、语态、语气,情态动词和非谓语动词等;人称代词、人称代词的格、物主代词、指示代词、连接代词、不定代词等的用法;介词的搭配;并列连词、从属连词的用法;形容词、副词的区别以及比较级和最高级的用法;固定搭配和习惯用法。 例如:本题中的 11.besides 改成 except 考查介词 12.practiced改成 practicing 考查语态 13.ad 改成have 考查时态 14.把away 删掉 考查动词 15.a改成the 考查冠词 16.late改成later 考查副词用法 17.oldier改成soldiers 考查名词单复数 18.real改成really 考查副词 二、句法改错 句法的测试包括:主谓语在数上的一致性;名词性从句、定语从句和强调句;句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性和逻辑性。 例如:本题中的 19.was 改成 were 考查主谓一致 三、语篇改错 语篇的测试包括:上下文的时态是否一致;上下文中的代词指代是否一致;上下文中的逻辑关系是否一致。 考点:考查语法的运用能力
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4.The last paragraph is mainly developed by          .

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