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高考临近，学习时间变紧，任务加重，很多同学内心压力大，学习效率低下。请为即将举行的班会写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对怎样保持良好的精神状态，高效而健康地进行复习备考的看法。要点如下：

1. 坚持锻炼；

2. 合理计划；

3. 注重饮食。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好。

Dear Classmates,

Good afternoon! Today is March 2nd, The college entrance exams are really around the corner now.

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Answer

Dear classmates,

Good afternoon!

Today is March 2nd. The college entrance exams are really around the corner now. As time becomes limited and school work begins to pile up, many students start to feel much stressed and find it hard to concentrate and study efficiently. What should we do to avoid this?

First of all, it is highly advisable that we have some physical exercise in that it is the best way to reduce stress and help us relax. Second, having a proper study plan is of great importance too，since it can improve efficiency. Last but not least, we should pay special attention to our diet as a balanced and nutritious diet can keep a busy mind smart and energetic.

Only if we can do these three things mentioned above will we make our time of study and preparation work enjoyable, efficient and fruitful.

Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。同时本文属于应用文中的演讲稿，要求你谈谈对怎样保持良好的精神状态，高效而健康地进行复习备考的看法。文章要使用一般现在时和第一人称为主的时态。要点：1. 高考临近，学习时间变紧，任务加重，很多同学内心压力大，学习效率低下。2. 保持良好的精神状态，高效而健康地进行复习备考的重要意义。3.具体做法：坚持锻炼，合理计划，注重饮食。建议文章分成三部分，分别叙述三个要点内容。同时可以在文章中添加谚语以增加文章的亮点，如“All work no play makes Jack a dull boy.”

【名师点睛】

本篇范文中很好地运用了各种连接成分，如first of all, second，last but not least等；这些连接词让文章第二部分称为一个有机的整体，显得很紧凑。同时文章里还使用了较多的高级句式，如only引导的倒装句Only if we can do these three things mentioned above will we make our time of study and preparation work enjoyable, efficient and fruitful. it引导的形式主语句it is highly advisable that we have some physical exercise；动名词做主语的句子：having a proper study plan is of great importance；总得说来，文章用词很地道，完成了文字提示中要的所有要点，并有适当发挥。是一篇不错的范文。

考点：考查半开放性作文