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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit. There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema. But I think we’d better to have more outdoor activities. As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired. But it’s a good idea to play ball games, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic. Our brains also need changes to make itself smart and active. In a word, exercise is good for health.

 

1.parts改为part 2.help改为helps 3.activity改为activities 4.to后面加the 5.删除better后面的to 6.longer改为long 7.getting改为get 8.But改为So 9.runnings改为running 10.itself改为themselves 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于说明文,告诉我们要多参加各种活动让自己更健康。 1.parts改为part 考查固定搭配。短语take part in参加。句意:参加娱乐活动帮助我们保持健康。 2.help改为helps 考查主谓一致。本句的主语是单个的动名词短语taking parts in recreation activities,且表达一件事情,所以谓语动词使用单数形式。 3.activity改为activities 考查名词单复数。本句中activity行动是可数名词,前面有形容词短语“various kinds of多种多样的”修饰,说明该名词应该使用复数形式。 4.to后面加the 考查固定短语。短语go to the cinema去看电影。其中的the不能省略。 5.删除better后面的to 考查固定短语。短语had better do sth最好坐某事;had better的后面直接加动词原形,不需要to。 6.longer改为long 考查形容词。句意:作为学生,我们通常在教室里坐的时间太长了。根据句意并没有比较的意思,所以使用原级long即可。 7.getting改为get 考查句子结构。本句转换主语是our eyes and brains,get在句中做谓语动词,而getting属于非谓语动词,不能单独在句中作谓语。 8.But改为So 考查连词。句意:作为学生我们在教室里坐的时间太久了,结果我们的眼睛和大难会累,所以,打球是一个好主意。根据句意可知上下文之间是因果关系,所以使用so而不是but。 9.runnings改为running 考查固定结构。短语do some running跑步,类似的结构还有do some shopping等。 10.itself改为themselves 考查代词。本句的主语是our brains,所以使用反身代词themselves作为动词make宾语。句意:我们的大脑也需要改变让他们自己聪明积极。 【名师点睛】 在短文改错中常出现的错误主要有以下几类: 1. 名词单复数用错,可数与不可数名词的混用。大多数短文改错都会有此类的错误。 如:they take him lots of good book and fresh fruit.(2009.陕西卷) 此处book改为books. book前用lots of修饰,应用复数。 2. 动词:时态和语态,常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时,中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象;或是及物动词后无宾语,或是不及物动词后加了宾语;需要接ing形式的接了to,或相反等。 如:The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop across the street from our middle school were gone. 把were改为are。根据上文可知饭店和鱼店消失都陈述的是现在的情况。 3. 形容词副词:常出现需形容词的地方用了副词或相反;关系副词where, when, why等的缺失或错用。 如:He has a comfortable room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read. (2009.陕西卷) 此处patiently改为 patient.修饰名词nurses,用形容词。 4. 介词:主要是介词的多余或缺失,错用。这一部分需要平时多多积累,弄清常用介词的搭配。 5. 主谓一致性:第三人称单数漏掉s,或主语为复数,谓语动词用了单数;再就是就近原则对主语的影响。 6. 冠词:定冠词the的多余或缺失,如季节,月份,星期,球类及三餐活动,称呼头衔前等不能加the的地方加了the,或是same等常和the一起使用的词却漏税掉了the;a, an的混用,特别注意:hour, honest等虽然首字母不是元音字母,但其发音却是以元音素开头,故用an,而useful, university, European, one—hour等虽然首字母是元音字母,但却以辅音音素开头,故用a。 如:and sports center has been built in their place. (2009全国卷I) 在此sports前应加a。 sports center是可数名词单数,表示不确定。 7. 数词:主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用,如分数的分子大于一时分母没有用复数等,基数词的复数形式如几百hundreds of,几千thousands of漏掉了s,或是当其前有具体数字或several时加了复数,如seven hundred,写作seven hundreds。 8. 连词:不合句中的逻辑关系。如需转折连词(如but)的时候用了承接连词(so),或相反等等。 如:This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to somebody else. 在此and改为but,前后构成转折,用but。 9. 代词:主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词,单数用了复数代词或相反;应当用形容词性的物主代词用了宾格,主格或相反,关系代词的错用或缺失。如只能用that引导的用了其它,或在不能用that的地方却用了that,或是在“介词+关系代词”结构中漏掉了介词等。 10. 常用固定短语或固定用法及句型用错。 如:It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expecting anything in return.(2009浙江卷) 在possible后加to。由 It is/was possible(或其他形容词)+ to do sth.固定句型决定。 考点:考查短文改错
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