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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I was working as a short-order cook at two restaurants in the same neighborhood. At an Saturday night, I was finishing the dinner shirt at a first restaurant and hurrying to work at the second place, but I was delayed. Because one table kept sent back an order of pancakes, insisting they were too colder. I replaced it several times, and still the customers were dissatisfied.

As soon as I was able to leave, I race out of the restaurant. Hardly I arrived at my second job when a server immediately handed me my first order. “Make sure of that these pancakes are hot,” she said, “because the customers just left a restaurant down the street where kept serving them cold ones.”

 

1.At改为On 2.a改为the 3.send改为sending 4.colder改为cold 5.it改为them 6.and改为but 7.race改为raced 8.Hardly后加had 9.删除sure后of 10.where改为that/which 【解析】 试题分析:本文属于记叙文,讲述了作者在两家餐厅打工,都遇见了同样有趣的一家人,这家人一直要点很热的薄饼。 1.At改为On 考查介词。在英语中,在具体某一天的晚上时,需要使用介词on。 2.a改为the 考查定冠词。在序数词前面通常要接定冠词the表示特指。所以本句要在序数词first前面使用the。 3.send改为sending 考查固定搭配。短语keep doing sth不停地做某事; 4.colder改为cold 考查形容词。句意:因为一张桌子不停地把点的饼退回了,坚持认为这些饼太凉了。根据句意说明本句并没有比较级的含义,而且too后面接形容词副词的原级。 5.it改为them 考查代词。本句中代词them指代前一句中提到的pancakes,因为pancakes是复数形式,所以使用them代替,it指代单数可数名词或不可数名词。 6.and改为but 考查连词。句意:我把饼换了好几次,但是顾客们仍然不满意。根据句意可知上下文之间是转折关系,所以使用but表示转折。 7.race改为raced 考查时态。根据第一段第二句At an Saturday night...可知本文叙述的是过去发生的事情,所以使用一般过去时。 8.Hardly后加had 考查时态和倒装。固定句式:Hardly....when....一...就....;其中hardly后面的主句要使用倒装句形式,本句when后面使用了过去时,说明前面的主句应该使用过去完成时,因为主句发生的时间在从句之前。句意:我一到第二个工作的地方,服务员就给了我第一道点菜单。 9.删除sure后of 考查固定句式。动词短语make sure后面直接加that引导的宾语从句,而make sure of后面要接名词或名词短语做宾语。本句后面使用了宾语从句that these....,所以前面使用make sure。 10. 【名师点睛】 在进行改错时,我们要注意改错四原则及四不改: 1)以改动最少为原则。 这是指每行最多只能改动一处,即在一个词上进行改动。可以是增词、减词、改词,但无论是何种改动,只能是增加一词,减少一词或把一个词改成另一个词。没有错误的一行只需打勾表明正确而无需改动。 2)实词以改变形式为原则。在改错中,实词的处理一般只是改变它的形式,而不能改变其词义也不能改换成另一个实词,更不能随便给添删。 如:Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. talk---talking而不是去掉enjoy. 3)以保持愿意不变为原则。一般应遵循保持句子原意的原则,即不能改变文章或作者所表达的意思,包括其语气和上下文的逻辑关系。只对短文中的用词错误、语法错误、行文关系错误进行改正,且要小改而不大改。 (1) …are still many people living in poor conditions. They make their lives. (广东卷) lives→living。make a / one’s living 为一固定短语。只需将 lives 改成 living 就可以了,不要将 their lives 改为 a living。 (2) But I have spent most my money, so I cannot… (四川卷) 在my前加 of。也有同学去掉 most,这种改法虽改正了语法错误,但改变了原意。作者想说的是“花 掉了大部分的钱,而不是全部”。 4)虚词以添加或删减为原则。 历年高考题需要添加或删除的地方为三四处。这些需要添删的词一般是冠词、代词、介词、关系词等,而动词、名词等的添删则不是很常见,因为太容易改变句子的原意。 (1) From his answer we shall know the something now. 不定代词前不能加冠词,所以故去掉the。 (2) Then I began to pay more attention my pronunciation. 固定搭配pay attention to后缺少介词to,应加上 四不改为:1)标点符号不改。2)大小写不改。3)词序错误不改。4)大纲外生词不改。 考点:考查短文改错
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