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短文改错

下面短文中有10处语言错误,请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

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I am a middle school student. I’m doing well in my studies, and ready to help another. In the school I like to talk with my classmates. However, I have a problem that troubled me all the time. It is the relationship between my desk-mate and mine.

My desk-mate is a hardworking student, he keeps the school rules good. However, he is a person of a few words. What’s more, he loses his temper easily. I don’t know to communicate with him. Maybe it’s why we have seldom sat down and changed our feelings and thoughts. I hope we can know each other better. I do hope we’ll be close. What can I do?

 

1.another 改为 others 2.troubled 改为troubles 3.mine 改为 me 4.he 改为 who 5.good改为 well 6.a few 的 a 去掉 7.don’t know 后加how 8.why 改为 because 9.changed 改为 exchanged 10.close 改为 closer 【解析】 试题分析: 1.another 改为 others 考查代词。我学习成绩很好,总是乐于帮助别人,another,另一个,此处应该用others指别人,故another改为others。 2.troubled 改为troubles 考查时态。本句应为一般现在时,所以将troubled改为troubles。 3.mine 改为 me 考查代词。Between为动词,后面应该用代词宾格形式,故mine改为me。 4.he 改为 who 考查非限制性定语从句。下半句为非限制性定语从句,应该使用关系代词指代前面的student,故he改为who。 5.good改为 well 考查副词。keep为动词,应该用副词修饰动词。故good改为well。 6.a few 的 a 去掉 考查短语。根据语境可知我的同桌是一个不善言谈的人,应该是few,表示几乎不说话。故去掉a。 7.don’t know 后加how 考查连接副词。我不知道如何与他交流。如何,how。 8.why 改为 because 考查连词。这是因为我们很少坐下交流彼此的观点。因为,because。 9.changed 改为 exchanged考查动词。交换彼此的观点,交换,exchange。 10.close 改为 closer 我希望我们能够更亲密。此处用比较级,所以close改为closer。 【名师点睛】 【名师点睛】 高考短文改错考点层次一般而言可依次分为词法的测试、句法的测试和语篇的测试三个层面。考点层次越高,就越能测试出考生运用语言的能力。低层次的考点往往侧重于语法方面的考查,而高层次的考点往往侧重于考生对文章意义方面的理解。 一、词法改错 词法的测试包括:定冠词和不定冠词的用法;名词的单复数和名词的所有格;动词的时态、语态、语气,情态动词和非谓语动词等;人称代词、人称代词的格、物主代词、指示代词、连接代词、不定代词等的用法;介词的搭配;并列连词、从属连词的用法;形容词、副词的区别以及比较级和最高级的用法;固定搭配和习惯用法。 例如:本题中的小题1another 改为 others(名词错误) 小题3mine 改为 me (代词错误) 小题5good改为 well(形容词副词用法错误) 小题6a few 的 a 去掉(冠词用法错误) 小题9changed 改为 exchanged(动词用法错误) 小题10close 改为 closer (形容词比较级用法错误) 二、句法改错 句法的测试包括:主谓语在数上的一致性;名词性从句、定语从句和强调句;句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性和逻辑性。 例如:小题4he 改为 who (非限制性定语从句关系代词的使用) 小题7don’t know 后加how(宾语从句连接代词使用错误) 小题8why 改为 because (表语从句连接代词使用错误) 三、语篇改错 语篇的测试包括:上下文的时态是否一致;上下文中的代词指代是否一致;上下文中的逻辑关系是否一致。 如本题中的小题2troubled 改为troubles 考点:考查短文改错
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1.______

You know the story, right? The tech guy built a mobile app and sold it very fast for a lot of money. You know, the story may seem real, but I bet it's incomplete. If you go investigate further, the guy has done 30 apps before and he has done a master's on the topic, a Ph.D. He has been working on the topic for 20 years. This is really interesting. I myself have a story in Brazil that people think is an overnight success. I come from a humble family, and two weeks before the deadline to apply to MIT, I started the application process. And, voila! I got in. People may think it's an overnight success, but that only worked because for the 17 years prior to that, I took life and education seriously. Your overnight success story is always a result of everything you've done in your life through that moment.

2.______

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3.______

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A. There will be four million fewer cars on the road for a year

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No. 3: Create a bedtime ritual

Do the same things each night to tell your body it's time to wind down. This might include taking a warm bath or shower, reading a book, or listening to light music. Be careful of using the TV or other electronic devices as part of your bedtime ritual. Some research suggests that screen time or other media use before bedtime has impact on sleep.

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1.Which of the following is helpful to have quality sleep at night?

A. listening to light music before bed

B. working out in the gym only in the day time

C. using expensive pillows that sell well

D. drinking lots of water instead of coffee before bed

2.Which of the following sleep tips is not mentioned in the passage?

A. Control your daytime sleep time.

B. Adopt healthy ways to handle stress.

C. Follow a flexible sleep timetable.

D. Schedule your daily physical activities.

3.According to the passage, in what situation do you need to contact your doctor?

A. You can not nap in the day time.

B. You frequently have trouble sleeping.

C. You do not fall asleep within 15 minutes.

D. You have too much to think about before bed.

4.What’s the purpose of this passage?

A. To provide advice on promoting better sleep at night.

B. To inform readers of different sleep habits before bed.

C. To offer tips on various relaxing activities before bed.

D. To convince readers of the importance of quality sleep at night.

 

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Oh, I had done the normal “motherly” things, like making sure my daughter got to ballet and tap and gym lessons. I went to all of her recitals and school concerts, parent-teacher conferences and open houses alone. I ran interference during my husband’s anger when something was spilled at the dinner table, telling her, “It will be okay, Honey. Daddy’s not really mad at you.” I did all I could to protect her from hearing the awful shouting after he returned from a night of drinking. Finally I did the best thing I could do for my daughter and myself: I removed us from the home that wasn’t really a home at all.

That day I became a mom was the day my daughter and I were sitting in our new home having a calm, quiet dinner just as I had always wanted for her. We were talking about what she had done in school and suddenly her little hand knocked over the full glass of chocolate milk by her plate. As I watched the white tablecloth and freshly painted white wall become dark brown, I looked at her small face. It was filled with fear, knowing what the outcome of the event would have meant only a week before in her father’s presence. When I saw that look on her face and looked at the chocolate milk running down the wall, I simply started laughing. I am sure she thought I was crazy, but then she must have realized that I was thinking, “It’s a good thing your father isn’t here!” She started laughing with me, and we laughed until we cried. They were tears of joy and peace and were the first of many tears that we cried together. That was the day we knew that we were going to be okay.

Whenever either of us spills something, even now, seventeen years later, she says, “Remember the day I spilled the chocolate milk? I knew that day that you had done the right thing for us, and I will never forget it.”

That was the day I really became a mom. I discovered that being a mom isn’t only going to ballet, and tap and gym recitals, and attending every school concert and open house. It isn’t keeping a spotless house and preparing perfect meals. It certainly isn’t pretending things are normal when they are not. For me, being a mom started when I could laugh over spilled milk.

1.What was the writer mostly engaged in seventeen years ago?

A. Passing inspection from the community.

B. Trying very hard to please the baby girl.

C. Nurturing the baby girl to become a child.

D. Running a perfect home to satisfy her husband.

2.According to the writer, ______ is not the normal “motherly” things.

A. signing up kids for ballet and gym lessons

B. attending parent-teacher conferences

C. protecting kids when they are scolded by the father

D. going to kids’ school concerts and open houses

3.The underlined phrase “ran interference” can best be replaced by______.

A. informed her       B. covered her

C. pleased her        D. pardoned her

4.It can be inferred from the passage that______.

A. mum and daughter had led a miserable life before moving out

B. being a mum is not pretending things are normal when they are not

C. the daughter spilled the chocolate milk deliberately in the new home

D. mum and daughter laughed together at the funny paints on the wall

5.According to the passage, when did the writer become a real mom?

A. The day she gave birth to her daughter

B. The day she lost contact with her husband

C. The day she created a relaxing family atmosphere

D. The day she laughed at the spilled chocolate milk

 

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