Question

假如你是李明，是光明中学一名高二学生。你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信，向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点：

焦虑症状	建议
头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等	1. 考前制订合适的复习计划。 2. 考试期间正常作息。 3. 睡前洗热水澡、 喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠。
其他建议（内容由考生自己拟定）

注意：1．根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2．词数：100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3．参考词汇：头晕dizzy．

Dear editor，

I am Li Ming，a Senior Three student in Guangming Middle School．I am writing to tell you

about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams．

Answer

Dear editor，

I am Li Ming, a Senior three student in Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams．

Most of us feel nervous whenever we are taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. (In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and) we are all eager to get rid of them．

First of all，we should study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Second, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore，during the period of exams， we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.(In my opinion, it is important for us to have a right attitude towards ecams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results.)Besides,we’d better go out for a walk or take some outdoor exercise before and after exm so that we can keep ourselves relaxed(and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)括号中的内容为非必要内容，不必每条建议后都附加理由。

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于提建议类写作，讲述的是为那个考前焦虑的李明提一些能够帮助他的建议的一封信，根据提示信息和题目要求来展开。

写作时注意以下几点：

1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。（如：本题中提供给我们了一些症状及建议，明确了写作的要点，可以由此展开书写，同时再增加一些自己的看法与解释。）

2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。（如：本文先列出原因，然后给出解释，在分类提出建议，最后总结观点，结构调理清晰，同时整齐，增加了文章的审美观。）

3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。写作书信时一定要注意文章结构和层次，提出建议时要具有说服力，对于一些常用的动词，要注意其其他形式以更为简练的表达自己的观点，要灵活运用各种短语和从句来丰富文章的内容。

【名师点睛】

本文中结构鲜明，可读性较高。比如：运用First of all…Second…Therefore…Besides这些词把提出的建议串联起来，显得结构性较强，同时是文章的文笔增高。we’d better go out for a walk or take some outdoor exercise before and after exm so that we can keep ourselves relaxed，这个句子运用到了so that结构，是一个固定句式结构，给文章在一次增加了亮点。同时文章中运用到了很多短语，如：lack of sleep缺少睡眠；areeager to渴望去做某事；avoid suffering from避免遭受什么什么，其中运用到了avoid doing和suffering from这两个固定结构。文中还有很多类似的短语，增加了文章的节奏感，是文章不显得枯燥。