Question

为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。

内容要点如下：

1．表示理解并给予安慰；

2．提出建议并说明理由。

注意：1.词数120左右；

2. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪

Hi Worried,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.

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Yours,

Jamie

Answer

Hi Worried,

I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong,so you don't have to worry so much.The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret.Here are three useful tips:

First,talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.Second,go outdoors and play games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.And third,remain optimistic about your future.Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

【解析】

本篇作文是一篇信件式的提建议的文章，首先文章的中心明确，本文以我提出建议，帮助那位同学解决脾气暴躁生活不顺的问题为中心。其次，本文的结构鲜明，现表明他的问题是一个普遍问题，然后自上而下分别根据题干提供的信息提出自己的建议，最后送出对那位同学的祝愿。最后文中的用词用句值得我们学习，如：Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.这句话中被动语态的运用，The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong，宾语从句的运用。get rid of等好短语的运用。

考点：考查建议类回信作文。

【名师点睛】

这篇作文是一篇关于提建议的作文，建议信的写作思路：

首先阅读所给材料，或是汉语说明，或者是英文材料，找出问题所在，即对方出了什么样的问题，需要哪方面的建议，然后根据分析给出合理化建议

1.注意格式；（如：本文要求写一封回信，则需要用信件格式，以及要注意分段，增加文章的美观性）

2.客观地提出建议；如：本篇作文中的第二段根据所给信息，客观的而且有条理的罗列了建议。

3.针对对方的问题，给出你的观点；

4.语言要委婉、精炼，同时要简洁，表达清楚。