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假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中至多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today I visited the Smiths my first time visit to a American family. They live in a small peacefully town. It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. The Smiths did their best to make me feel at home. They offered myself coffee and other drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing together. They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question. In fact, they are planning to visit China in next year.

 

1.去掉time 2.a改成an 3.peacefully改成peaceful 4.for改为of 5.drove改为drive 6.myself改为me 7.have改为had 8.在eager之前加were 9.question改为questions 10.去掉in 【解析】 1.去掉time;time是多余的,汉语说第一次访问,英语说my first visit便可。这一题是考查英汉语不同的表达习惯。如果一定要用time则可说my first time ro visit an American family 这时visit成了动词,visit之后就不能用to了。涉及到第二行出现了两个错误。不合题目要求。 2.a改成an; 考查冠词用法,不定冠词a与辅音开头的词连用,后面若是元音开头的单词,就要用an,把a改成an便可。 3.peacefully改成peaceful;原句:They live in a small peacefully town。他们生活在一个祥和的小镇上。形容词修饰名词,副词修饰动词,所以此处为peacefully。 4.for改为of;考查介词的搭配be kind of sb to do sth.把文中的for改为of。 5.drove改为drive;连接词and连接的是两个并列的动作:meet与drive.需把drove改为drive. 6.myself改为me;考查固定短语offer sb sth,They offered myself coffee,主语是they,所以这里不能用反身代词,直接用宾格me即可。 7.have改为had;考查动词时态的使用。整篇文章记叙过去发生的事,用的过去时;visited,was,did,offered,asked等,故have也应改为had。 8.在eager之前加were;考察固定短语be eager to do,若是少了be动词,整个句子缺少了谓语动词,是不完整的。然后根据主语they和时态,确定为were。 9.question改为questions;考查名词复数的使用,根据lots of 可知,其后应该用questions。 10.去掉in;介词的使用不当。汉语常说在下一周,下一月,下一年,英语既不用on也不用in.只用 next week, next month,next year。便可。去掉in.与next的这种用法相似的还有this, last与one,它们与表示时间的名词连用时,不能再加介词。 【名师点睛】 关于改错题的建议 1.名词和限制词的搭配 主要涉及可数与不可数名词与冠词、指示代词、物主代词的错误搭配,以及名词的单复数的误用。如小题9原文为…and asked me lots of question.{名词复数的误用},根据lots of 可知,其后应该用questions。 2.动词的时态、语态以及非谓语动词 常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时中间杂有另一时态的现象,以及动词的谓语与非谓语形式、非谓语动词之间的误用。如.小题7原文为We have a good time talking and laughing together.{动词时态的误用}。看似正确,其实不然,整篇文章记叙过去发生的事,用的过去时;visited,was,did,offered,asked等,故have也应改为had。 3.代词的误用 主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词,单数用了复数代词或相反;应当用形容词性的物主代词用了名词性等。 4.数词的误用 主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用,以及hundred, thousand, dozen, score等词和具体数量词连用时的用法以及表示约数的用法。 5.形容词与副词 主要涉及到形容词和副词的原级、比较级与最高级的误用,以及形容词和副词的误用等。如小题3原句:They live in a small peacefully town。{形容词与副词的误用} 他们生活在一个祥和的小镇上。形容词修饰名词,副词修饰动词,所以此处为peacefully。 6.考查英语中的并列现象 在一些英语中的并列结构中没有用并列的语法结构,如并列连词连接的两个部分等。如小题5原文为It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home.(忽略并列结构)连接词and连接的是两个并列的动作:meet与drive.需把drove改为drive. 7.考查上下文的逻辑关系 but, and, so,however, otherwise等一些并列连词和连接副词的误用。before, after, when, until, since等状语从句引导词的误用等。还有肯定和否定的误用等。 8.一些相似结构的误用 如used to do, be used to do, be used to doing等结构的误用。 9.惯用法的搭配 改错步骤 上述9个方面,同学们在做题时只要稍加留意,找出错误的比率就会增大很多。做短文改错题时一般遵循以下几个步骤: 1.先通读全文。认真阅读短文,在做题之前确保已经弄清原文大意。注意文章中上下文的逻辑关系是否正确,时态、人称、主谓、指代等是否一致。 2.聚焦出题热点、综合运用所学语言知识,分句(注意以句子为单位而不是以行为单位)对不同的错误情况进行分析和回答(即改词、加词或减词)。 3.再次通读全文,校对自己的改正是否正确。一般各种改错的方式都应该用到,如果出现了某一种改法(如加词、减词等)没有用到,要考虑自己的改错应该有问题,要对刚才不是很有把握的行进行推敲。在自己认为正确的行后划勾,并且校对其他行改正的符号是否准确,大小写是否拼写正确(这点同学们很容易忽视)。如果某一行有两种改错方式要推敲哪一种是最佳改法。 考点:考查固定搭配以及语法
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