Question

第二节书面表达

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris刚刚转学，感到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境，请你根据以下信息回信。

1．多跟同学交流沟通；

2．积极参加学校活动；．

3．向老师寻求帮助。

注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Chris，

I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school．

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Answer

Dear Chris,

I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful.

First, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible. In this way, you will get to know each other better. Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. Lastly, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers, who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions.

I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you. If there is anything more I can do to help, please let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。但是在写自己的感受的时候，要求考生自己发挥拓展，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。因为是书信，所以本篇作文在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

【亮点说明】文章的时态使用得当，概括文章所要求的全部要点，足见作者语言功底。文中使用了first，second，lastly介绍学校情况，条理清楚。文中使用了have trouble doing sth句型；faced with分词短语作状语；还使用了asking短语作宾语；高级短语或短语of some help，involve等；恰当使用which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions.限制性定语从句等充分彰显作者英语功底。

【考点】考查提纲类书面表达。