Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jim,

Thank you for your last letter telling me your recently news. I'd like to tell you something about our school sports meeting. It was holding on October,20th, which was a fine day.

There were over 1,600 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finishes the race in 11.2 seconds and broke down the school record. They were all very excited. The sports meeting was great success. That was why we were all making every effort to our class honor. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of what we had done.

Looking forward to receiving your letter.

Yours,Li Pi

Answer

1.recently →recent

2.holding →held

3.attend →attending

4.finishes→finished

5.去掉down;

6.They→We

7.great前加a

8.why →because

9.to→for

10.winner→winners

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一封回信，介绍了运动会的详细情况。尽管我没有成为冠军，我依然为我们所做的感到骄傲。

1.recently →recent 考查形容词。新闻news为名词应该用形容词修饰，故把recently改为recent。

2.holding →held考查动词。举行hold 与运动会sports meeting之间为被动关系，holding为主动形式，故把holding改为held。

3.attend →attending考查动词。There be 句型后加动词ing形式，故把attend改为attending。

4.finishes→finished考查动词。全文讲述的为过去事情，应该用动词一般过去时态，finishes为一般现在时态，故把finishes改为finished。

5.去掉down 考查动词。打破记录用动词 break 此时为及物动词其后直接加名词，故去掉down。

6.hey→We考查代词。根据句意我们班同学打破记录让我们we都非常兴奋，故把They改为We。

7.great前加a 考查冠词。这场运动会非常成功，成功为抽象名词具体化，所以前面应加不定冠词a。故把great前加a。

8.why →because考查连词。因为用because, why表示为什么，故把why 改为because。

9.to→for考查介词短语。making every effort for 尽力做某事，故把to改为for。

10.winner→winners考查名词。One of +可数名词复数形式，故把winner改为winners。