Question

随着中国经济的发展，私家车日渐增多，很多学生上学都有车接送，为此，同学之间观点不一。请你根据下表中双方不同观点用英语写一篇文章给上海英文星报--Shanghai Star ，介绍这种情况及你对这一现象的看法。

支持	反对
1.省时、方便； 2.安全。	1.拥堵、车祸； 2.易相互攀比。
你的看法……

注意：

1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数100左右；

3.文章开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：攀比 vie with …

书面表达

In recent years, more and more students go to school in private cars. People have different opinions about this phenomenon.

Answer

In recent years, more and more students go to school in private cars. People have different opinions about this phenomenon

Some people favor taking private cars because it is safer and much more time-saving than taking other means of transportation. In this sense, going to school in a private car is more convenient.

However, other people argue that too many private cars will cause traffic jams and even accidents during the rush hour. What’s worse, students tend to vie with each other to show they are from rich families by taking expensive cars.

In my opinion, students may have other options, such as buses, and bicycles. Private cars are surely more convenient, but as a student, I prefer riding a bicycle. By doing so, I won’t do any harm to the environment while improving my health.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲式作文。此类作文为提纲式作文中的正反观点型议论文。通常情况下分成三部分写作：第一段写赞成的原因；第二段写反对的原因；最后一段写自己的观点及原因。需要注意的是时态和人称的问题。此类文章的时态通常为一般现在时，人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。在说明原因时，要恰当的使用连接词，使得行文更加流畅。

【亮点说明】本文条理清晰、结构合理。使用了多个短语，如：taking other means of transportation、In this sense等等；还使用了各种句式，如宾语从句：show they are from rich families by taking expensive cars.等等。

考点：考查提纲式作文