Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My mother always bought gifts to me for my birthdays. With my fifteen birthday around the corner, she asked me which I wanted. For the first time, I realize how lucky I was to have born in such a fortunate family. I was satisfying and there was nothing more I needed. That was because I told my mother that instead of getting an expensive gift, I’d love to use the money to help others. At the first, she felt surprised. When she realized I was seriously, she offered me 500 yuan. I bought some toys and went to the orphanage in our city. I handed out the toys to the child and had a good time with them.

Answer

1.to→ for

2.fifteen→fifteenth

3.which→what

4.realize→realized

5.加been

6.satisfying→satisfied

7.because→why

8.去掉the

9.seriously→serious

10.child →children

【解析】

试题分析：每次生日，妈妈都会给我买礼物。这次生日，妈妈也问我想要什么，我认为我生活在这样一个美好的家庭很幸运，这次不想要礼物了，而是想要帮助别人，妈妈很支持我。

1.to→ for 考查介词。Buy sth for sb给某人买某物，固定搭配，所以用 for。

2.fifteen→fifteenth 考查数词。第十五个生日，用序数词，用fifteenth。

3.which→what 考查关系词。引导ask的宾语从句以及做want的宾语，不能用which做宾语，故用what。

4.realize→realized 考查时态。本文全文是过去时态，故用realized。

5.加been 考查时态。我被生出来，是被动语态，加been。

6.satisfying→satisfied 考查形容词。感到满意，而satisfying是令人满意的，一般修饰物，故用satisfied 。

7.because→why 考查关系词。I was satisfying and there was nothing more I needed是 I told my mother that instead of getting an expensive gift,I’d love to use the money to help others的原因，不是结果，正是我对生活的满意，使我不在想要什么了，而想帮助别人，用why。

8.去掉the 考查冠词。At first，首先，固定搭配，不用冠词，所以去掉the。

9.seriously→serious 考查形容词。修饰系动词was用形容词，用 serious。

10.

考点：考查了冠词、介词、单复数、关系词、形容词、时态等的用法