Question

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右

边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线（\）划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.

He did not want share things with other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something he did made people angry. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.

Answer

1.want后加上to

2.them--it

3.where—which/that/删除where或者find后加上it

4.other--others

5.is--was

6.making--made

7.√

8.删除on

9.loudly—loud

10.difference--different

【解析】

试题分析：

1.1】want后加上to 考查want的用法。want常构成短语：want to do sth.，意为想要做某事。故在want后加上to，句意为：他不想和其他人分享事物。

2.2】them—it 考查代词的用法。此处代指上文提到的a chocolate cake，为单数，故用it而非them。句意为：当他买个巧克力蛋糕时，他会把蛋糕藏在我找不着的地方。

3.3】where—which/that/删除where或者find后加上it 考查定语从句。本句考查定语从句的连接词的选择，先行词为place，代入从句中担当宾语，故不用where，而用which或that，也可以省略。当然也可以在find之后加上it，代指上文的cake，这样where在从句中担当地点状语也是正确的。

4.4】other—others 考查代词。本句考查other和others的区别，other为形容词，其后需要接名词，而此处并没有名词，故用others，为代词，意为其他人。句意为：他从不帮助他人。

5.5】is—was 考查时态，根据上文的said可知，本句用一般过去时，故把is改成was.句意为：他说他很忙。

6.6】making—made 考查谓语动词。本句中的make应该是本句的谓语动词，故把making改成made，用动词的过去式担当谓语动词。句意为：网球运动使他很忙碌。

7.7】√

8.8】删除on 考查介词。本句考查时间状语one night，无需加介词，故去掉on。句意为：一天晚上，他把音乐开得高高的，知道凌晨四点。

9.9】loudly—loud 考查形容词。本句考查修饰名词用形容词，故把loudly改成loud，表示大声的。

10.10】difference—different 考查形容词。本句考查形容词担当表语，故把difference改成different，句意为：但是现在他不同了。