Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换批改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中至多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在下面写出改正后的词。

注意：

1. 每次错误及其修改均仅限一词

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

A young man called low-Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests to living a low-carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.

Answer

1. become-became

2.去掉to

3.reducing-reduce/to reduce

4.she-he

5.up -down

6.Therefore-Besides

7.simply-simple

8.invention-inventions

9.加上of

10.去掉but

【解析】

试题分析：一个名为低碳先生的年轻人，从2011年以来就一直过着低碳的生活。

1.become-became 考查动词过去式。根据这句话后面in 2011可知这句应该用一般过去式，become的过去式为became。

2.去掉to 考查动词搭配。根据suggest doing这样的固定搭配，可知要将to去掉。

3.reducing-reduce /to reduce 考查动词固定短语。help后面的动词可以用do，也可以用to do。

4.she-he 考查人称代词。根据开头a young man可知应该把人称代词she改成he。

5.up -down 考查动词短语。turn up意为调高，这里根据后面的turn off the light可知他看电视喜欢把亮度调到最暗，这样才符合环保的主题。故应该用turn down，意为调低。

6.Therefore-Besides 考查连词。根据上下文可知，他还骑车去工作而不是开车，这些都是和上句之间相并列的，故用连词besides表示承接，意为另外。

7.simply-simple 考查形容词。这里应该用形容词simple修饰名词life。

8.invention-inventions 考查名词的复数。so many后面应该用可数名词的复数形式，故将invention改成inventions。

9.加上of 考查固定短语。In support of为固定短语支持。

10.