Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Zhang Xiaowen, who is sixteen, a middle school student in Northern China. She is one of the best student in her class and she was won an award for young scientists last year. When seating in the classroom she looks just like all her classmates. And after class her life is obvious different. She was born without the ability to use her legs and she has no feeling below the waist. She had to use a wheelchair to get around. And it often takes her a little long to do everyday things, such as getting out of bed, getting dressed and going to the school. So far she has created many programmes and one of which received an award at her province's science fair.

Answer

1.加上is

2.student--students

3.去掉was

4.seating—seated/sitting

5.And--But

6.obvious--obviously

7.had--has

8.long--longer

9.去掉the

10.which--them

【解析】

试题分析：

1.加上is 考查谓语动词。本句主语是Zhang Xiaowen，其后没有出现谓语动词，故加上is，构成主系表结构。句意为：张晓文，16岁，是中国北部的一名中学生。

2.student—students 考查名词。本句考查one of+ns的结构，故把student改成students。句意为：她是她们班最好的学生之一。

3.去掉was 考查动词。动词win是及物动词，此处没有被动关系，故去掉was。句意为：去年她获得了年轻科学家的称号。

4.seating—seated/sitting 考查费谓语动词。本句考查非谓语动词担当状语，需要注意的是seat是及物动词，表示某人坐着，可以用be seated或者sit。故此处把seating改成seated或者sitting。

5.And—But 考查连词。前一句意为：她看起来和同学们一样；后一句意为：在课后，她的生活却明显不同。两句之间存在转折关系，故把and改成but，注意大小首字母。

6.obvious—obviously 考查副词。本句考查修饰形容词用副词，故把obvious改成obviously。句意为：她的生活却明显不同。

7.had—has 考查时态。根据上文的has以及下文的takes可知，此处是她的实际情况，故用一般现在时，所以把had改成has。

8.long—longer 考查比较级。根据a little修饰比较级的用法以及对上文她患有残疾的描述可知，她所花的时间要比别人长。故把long改成longer。

9.去掉the 考查冠词。本句考查有无冠词对短语意义的影响。go to school意为上学；而go to the school则意为到学校去，此处表达她去上学，故去掉the。

10.—them 考查代词。根据之间的连词and可知前后是并列成分，既然前面为完整的句子，那么后面也应该是完整的句子。故把which改成them，担当主语。