Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin．Therefore, I couldn't understand "real music"．After I  graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool．l will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store． There I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed．He became my the first guitar teacher．It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model．Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.

Answer

1. learn-learning

2.Therefore-However

3.at-from

4.started-start

5.all-both

6.that-which

7.去掉the

8.choose-to choose

9.model-models

10.importantly-important

【解析】

试题分析： 当我还是小孩子的时候我练习小提琴，可是练来练去也不懂什么是真正的音乐，后来中学毕业后，朋友建议我学吉他，我对吉他是一见钟情，以后每天都练习，吉他成了我生活最重要的部分。

1.learn-learning 考查固定短语。Spend…doing花时间做某事，动词用-ing的形式。故把learn改成learning。

2.Therefore-However 考查连词。上下文语境，虽然我练小提琴有两年，我还是不能理解何为真正的音乐，故用However表示转折。

3.at-from 考查介词。Graduate from固定短语，从….毕业，故at改成from。

4.started-start 考查动词。主句用了suggest，后面的从句应该用虚拟语气，即suggest that sb.(should) do sth。故 started改成start原形。

5.all-both 考查代词。根据上文a friend of mine可见我朋友和我两个人认为，所以用both。

6.that-which 考查关系代词。介词后面只能用which，which代指前文的 the day。故用which。

7.去掉the 考查修饰词的用法。First前面my和 the不能同时使用。故去掉the。

8.choose-to choose 考查不定式动词。It took sb. … to do sth.做某事花费某人多长时间。故用to choose。

9.model-models 考查名词复数。Several表示几个，后面应该用可数名词的复数形式，故model改成models。

10.importantly-important 考查形容词。这里应该用形容词important修饰名词part，最重要的部分。故用important。