Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

A discussion about hiking had been held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people feel healthier, fresher or more harmonious with the nature. They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have ever been to, and accidents have happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think not safe to organize such dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.

Answer

1.had—has

2.or—and

3.the去掉

4.deep—deeply

5.relaxing—relaxed

6.ever—never

7.because后加of

8.life—lives

9.think后加it

10.which--that

【解析】

1.had—has 一个关于徒步旅行的讨论在我们班已经被讨论。此处考查现在完成时态的被动语态。故把had—has。

2.or—and此处表示并列的递进关系，故把or—and。

3.the去掉 nature此处表示“大自然”，前面不用冠词。故把the去掉。

4.deep—deeply“深深地被吸引”，副词修饰过去分词，故把deep—deeply。

5.relaxing—relaxed句意是：他们感到放松。故把relaxing—relaxed。

6.ever—never句意是：探索我从来没有去过的地方。故把ever—never。

7.because后加of 句意是：因为贫穷的知识。because of后跟名词，故在because后加of。

8.life—lives此处life表示“生命”，可数名词，“失去他们的生命”。故把life—lives。

9.think后加it 此处是：作形式宾语，后面的动词不定式作真正的宾语，故在think后加it。

10.which—that此处是同位语从句，表示suggestions的具体内容，故把which—that。

考点：考查短文改错