Question

短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分;格式错误不给分。

Last Sunday, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and can’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I tried my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying , played with Lily. At last his mother came, that made me feel very happy. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with each other, the world will become more beautiful.

Answer

1.there was 改成there were

2.cry改成crying

3.can’t改为couldn’t.

4.find前加 to

5.on the same time改成at the same time.

6.careful改成carefully

7.palyed 改成 playing 或之前加and

8.his mother 改成her mother.

9.that 改成 which

10.with划掉

【解析】

试题分析：作者和朋友在动物园遇到一个孩子走丢了，决定帮助她找妈妈。她们各司其职，把小朋友哄好了，并帮助她找到了妈妈。每个人都应该尽力地帮助别人，世界才会变得更美好。

1.there was 改成there were；考查there be句型。句子主语为lots of people，故谓语应为复数，was改成were。

2.cry改成crying；考查动词。Find sb doing sth“发现某人正在做某事”，故cry 改成crying。

3.can’t改为couldn’t；考查时态。She was lost and can’t find her mother.句子前半段为过去时态，切用and联接，时态保持一致，can’t 改成couldn’t。

4.find前加 to；考查动词搭配。Try one’s best to do sth“尽力做某事”，故find 前加to。

5.on the same time改成at the same time.；考察介词。At the same time 是固定搭配，“同时，尽管如此”，没有on the same time的结构。

6.careful改成carefully；考查副词。Carefully修饰look after，副词修饰动词和动词词组，故careful改成carefully。

7.palyed 改成 playing 或之前加and；考查动词搭配。The little girl stopped crying , played with Lily.此处played的用法不明，如果sopped和played并列，表示“小女孩停止了哭泣，并和Lily玩。”，那么played前加and表示和stopped的并列关系。如果played和crying并列，那played应改为playing，stop doing sth“停止做某事”，句意为“小女孩不哭了，也不和Lily玩了”，两者亦可。

8.his mother 改成her mother.；考查人称代词。根据上下文可知，此处为小女孩的妈妈，故his应改为her。

9.that 改成 which；考查非限定性定语从句。Which用于非限定性定语从句，不能用that，故把that 换成which。

10.；考查短语搭配。Help with“帮助某人做某事”，与句意不符，删掉with。

考点：考察篇章理解及相关语法知识