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As senior three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with my parents. I always feel gratitude for their unselfish care and love. Thanks to their constant encouragement, I have made rapidly progress in my studies.
It will be less than one month since the final exam, so I’m under the pressure now. I would appreciate if they could have a frequent talk with me but provide me with timely help, which contributes to keep a good state.
I have made up my mind to study hard, for I believe hard work was the key to success. Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in various sports activity to build up my body.
Since early childhood, I love dancing. I always admire the movements of 1.(profession) dancers. My mother used to laugh at me every time I glued my head in front of the TV set during a dancing video. Later, I registered myself at 2.local ballet dancing class where I was able to examine the type of dancing movements and learn how to move better. I remember that my3.(feel) were that life was too good to be true.
Now, 4.I have to stop my classes, my dancing days are5.（certain) not over. Today, every time I 6.(give) a chance alone in the living room, I enjoy7.(move) my body to the music.
Have you ever noticed that dancers are always 8.（healthy), have more energy, and seem to have a lot more fun than non-dancers? That is because dancing is one of the best ways for people to keep a better statues.9.is generally admitted that when one is in good health, he or she is able to enjoy life and avoid its negative impacts 10.him or her every day.
One Friday, we were packing to leave for a weekend away when my daughter heard cries for help. When I went outside to what was wrong, I discovered an elderly neighbor had fallen down. She was in pain so I helped her inside her house and her on the bed.
I noticed how her place was and it was obvious she hadn’t cleaned it for a while. She insisted she didn’t need an and that someone would be around soon, so I put a bottle of water at her side and .
On my return, I felt sad that, although we had been neighbors for 18 months, apart from a few smiles, we hadn’t . I hadn’t even noticed she hadn’t been for weeks due to painful back.
That weekend I met my grandma for her 80th birthday, and I noticed how her flat seemed in comparison with my . Then I remembered that my grandma was usually visited by her relatives. , my neighbor, as far as I knew, had no family regularly .
When I returned home I went to visit her, but she didn’t my knocks. I walked inside. She was more now than when she started to see me. She explained she was Ok. Yet, unable to due to her back, she could not unpack groceries that a delivery boy had left at floor level and her kitchen was filled with because she was unable to take it out by herself.
we’ve become good friends and chat every day. Now, every time I from putting out her garbage, her mails or just chatting, I feel a deep sense of and peace, so I am really content that I can help others.
1.A. identify B. comfort C. assure D. check
2.A. luckily B. easily C. clearly D. scarcely
3.A. insisted B. settled C. persuaded D. called
4.A. dirty B. comfortable C. wide D. tidy
5.A. operation B. ambulance C. encouragement D. application
6.A. provided B. served C. presented D. left
7.A. worked B. competed C. quarreled D. connected
8.A. away B. off C. outside D. around
9.A. clean B. narrow C. smelly D. sweet
10.A. wife’s B. neighbor’s C. relative’s D. daughter’s
11.A. In short B. As a result C. On the contrary D. After all
12.A. dropping by B. looking after C. bringing up D. sending to
13.A. answer B. reply C. appreciate D. recognize
14.A. curious B. thankful C. angry D. impatient
15.A. sit down B. put down C. lie down D. bend down
16.A. dust B. garbage C. food D. furniture
17.A. Suddenly B. Gradually C. Temporarily D. regularly
18.A. suffer B. escape C. return D. stop
19.A. collecting B. reading C. writing D. copying
20.A. determination B. presentation C. ambition D. satisfaction
With Christmas just around the corner, it is time for us to plan our holidays. 1.
Organize a Charity Show
Christmas is about spreading joy and love. It’s about giving. We give our family presents on this day to show them with happiness and love, don’t we? But have you ever wondered how the poor celebrate their Christmas? Does Santa leave gifts for them too? 2.Use all the activities to buy gifts or necessities for those less rich.
Visit Orphanages and Old Age Homes
Christmas is an occasion for the entire family to come together and celebrate. More than the celebrations, we look forward to being near our close ones. 3.Form a group and spend an entire day with children or senior at orphanages and old age homes.
Start a Donation Drive
When we do something alone, the impact of that action isn’t as great as it would be if done by a group. 4.A lot of people will want to donate clothes and other necessary items. Along with gifts, if you donate these to people as well, it will really make a difference.
5.Plan these activities in time and have fun with your family and friends. Merry Christmas！May God bless you!
A. Shopping is an entirely different experience during Christmas.
B. Here are some fun Christmas activities that you are absolutely going to love.
C. If you have the time, organize a donation drive in your locality.
D. Now that you know these activities, you can select a few of them to keep yourself busy.
E. As charity, you can arrange for a show in your circle of friends or in your neighborhood.
F. Gifting something to your family members, friends and colleagues is important.
G. The same joy can be shared with people who don’t have the company of their family on this happy occasion.
Every year, a handful of new words enter the world’s collective vocabulary, but only one has the honor of being named Oxford Dictionaries’ Word of the Year. And this year’s top honor goes to “selfie”.
The frequency of the word selfie used in the English language has increased by 17,000 per cent since this time last year. This figure is calculated by Oxford Dictionaries using a research program which collects around 150 million English words currently in use from around the web every month. To qualify, a word need not have been invented within the past 12 months but it does need to stand out or become notable at that time.
Selfie is defined by Oxford Dictionaries as: “A photograph that one has taken of oneself, typically one taken with a smart phone or webcam and uploaded to a social media website.” Oxford Dictionaries said the earliest known usage is an Australian online forum post in 2002. A man posted a picture of injuries to his face when he tripped over some steps. He apologized for the fact that the picture was out of focus, saying that it was not because he was drunk but because it was a selfie.
Judy Pearsall, editorial director for Oxford Dictionaries, said: “Using the Oxford Dictionaries language research program, we can see a phenomenal upward trend in the use of selfie in 2013, and this helped to win its selection as Word of the Year.” She also added: “Social media sites helped to popularize the term, with selfie appearing on the photo-sharing website Flicker as early as 2004, but usage wasn’t widespread until around 2012, when selfie was being used commonly in mainstream media sources.”
Selfies have taken the world by storm. Everyone from the first family to ordinary people has taken the time to pose for a selfie. Celebrities like Miley Cyrus, Jennifer Lawrence, and Jennifer Aniston have all showed their new haircuts with selfies this year. Selfie was added to the Oxford Dictionaries online in August, but not yet in the Oxford English.
1.What does this passage mainly talk about?
A. The definition of the word “Selfie”.
B. The widespread usage of the word “Selfie” in 2012.
C. “Selfie” has been chosen as the Word of the Year of 2013.
D. “Selfie” began to be used in the Oxford English.
2.What can we learn from the passage about the word Selfie?
A. Social media sites helped to popularize the word Selfie.
B. The frequency of the word “selfie” has increased to 17,000 % since 2004.
C. Celebrities and the first family have all showed their new haircuts with selfies.
D. The earliest known usage of “selfie” was a man who was drunk.
3.The word “selfie” was chosen the Word of the Year by _____________.
A. A social media website.
B. The photo-sharing website Flicker.
C. A research program by Oxford Dictionaries.
D. People who take picture using a smart phone or webcam.
4.In which column of a newspaper can we find this article?
A. Arts B. Entertainment
C. Science D. Culture
Just weeks after a special memorial voyage to mark the 100th anniversary of the sinking of the Titanic, an Australian billionaire has announced plans to build an exact replica(复制品) of the Titanic, which is just as similar to the original one as possible. The Titanic replica will make its first voyage from Southampton, England to New York in 2016.
The Titanic is a famous ship that sank in 1912. The attractive story of the ocean liner(邮轮) has made millions of people interested in it around the world. It was believed to be an unsinkable ship but it hit an iceberg and sank on its first voyage. More than 1,500 people died in the sinking of the Titanic, which at the time was the world’s largest and most luxurious ocean liner.
When fully built, the Titanic II will be 270 meters (886 feet) long and capable of holding 1,680 passengers. Unlike the original Titanic which was powered by coal-fired boiler and steam engines, the Titanic II will have modern diesel(柴油机) and electric engines. Also unlike the first Titanic, the Titanic II will have more than enough lifeboats to accommodate everyone on board if something should go wrong.
When asked whether the new replica would sink, Mr. Palmer replied: “Of course it will sink if you put a hole in it. He also added “It will be designed as a modern ship with all the technology to ensure that doesn’t happen.”
When Mr. Palmer was asked if he expected his Titanic to be successful, he simply said: “At my age, you don’t really worry so much about whether you’ll make money or lose money on something, but I believe that it is worth building it.”
1.Why is the Titanic replica being built?
A. To make a voyage from Southampton, England to New York.
B. To mark the 100th anniversary of the sinking of the Titanic.
C. To realize Mr. Palmer’s dream of constructing a luxurious ocean liner.
D. Not clearly talked about in the passage.
2.What’s mainly talked about in Paragraph 2?
A. The travelling route of the Titanic.
B. A short introduction to the original Titanic.
C. The number of people on the Titanic when it sank.
D. People’s great interest in the attractive story of the ocean liner.
3.What is the difference between the Titanic II and the original one?
A. Titanic II will be powered by modern diesel and electric engines.
B. The appearance of Titanic II will be more luxurious.
C. The construction of Titanic II will be more complex.
D. The number of the lifeboats on Titanic II will be smaller.
4.What is Mr. Palmer’s attitude towards his Titanic II replica?
A. It will sink with a hole in it.
B. It will definitely be a great success.
C. It is worthwhile to build it.
D. It will make him lose money.
