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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. 

Even the heavy rain can not stop us.

We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road,  all in high spirit. 

On either side of the road was green fields. 

We could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter. 

At noon we reached to the top of the mountain,  there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes. 

After short rest, we started going down

It rained more harder.

We were wet all over,  and we still felt happy.

 

1.can 改为could 2.extreme改为extremely 3.spirit改为spirits 4.was改为were 5.mixing改为mixed 6.去掉top 7.theres改为where 8.加上a 9.more改为much 10.and改为but 【解析】 1. 改为could;由第一句可知,文章使用的是过去时态,故第二句Even the heavy rain can not stop us. can要改为could。 2. set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit. narrow窄的,形容词,古要用副词来修饰。故extreme改为extremely。 3. 精神,是可数名词。第三句We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit.中spirit要改为spirits。 4. either side of the road was green fields. 中介词短语作主语,主语要根据green fields来确定,green fields是复数形式,故谓语动词be动词要用复数形式。was改为were。 5. could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter。mix,vt混合,be mixed with…混合…。这里用过去分词短语作定语。故要把mixing改为mixed。 6. noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes. 7. noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes.中,后面部分是一个where引导的定语从句,修饰前面的mountain,要用关系代词where引导。故把there改为where。 8. short rest, we started going down中,在短暂的休息之后,应该是After a short rest.故要加上a。 9. rained more harder.中形容词的比较级一般用much修饰,故要把more改为much。 10. were wet all over, and we still felt happy.两个句子中间是转折的关系。所以要把and改为but。 考点:考查短文改错
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