Question

假如你是新华中学的学生会主席李华，最近学生忙于学习，疏于锻炼，体质下降，容易感冒，结合实际，写一份“号召锻炼”的倡议书，内容如下：

1. 现状分析；

2. 倡导锻炼。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。

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Answer

Recently, a large number of students devote all their time to studies and spend little time in exercising. As a result, some students are not healthy and often suffer from colds, which affects their studies and health.

As the old saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” At school, we need to keep the balance between work and exercise, otherwise if we work too much, we cannot work efficiently. Therefore, we should pay more attention to exercising. It is suggested that we should take enough exercise —half an hour each day. Only in this way can we keep energy and achieve a better result. Let’s take exercise every day from today on!

【解析】

试题分析：对于写类似倡议书这样的文章，先要列出现状，指出这些现状带来的不良影响，然后提出改变这些现状的迫切性及相应的对策，应题目要求，可采取两段式，先分析现状，然后提出建议。注意文中所给的信息，不可遗漏，可以多进行一些补充，尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。时态：用一般现在时。

【亮点说明】第一，结构上清晰明了，严谨简洁；内容上符合题意。第二，词组、句式及谚语的灵活运用，例如devote sth to sth、suffer from；文章涉及到限制性定语从句，例如第一段的最后一句“As a result, some students are not healthy and often suffer from colds, which affects their studies and health.”；倒装句，例如第二段的倒数第二句“Only in this way can we keep energy and achieve a better result.”；条件句，例如第二段的第二句“if we work too much, we cannot work efficiently. ”；主语从句，例如第二段的倒数第三句“It is suggested that we should take enough exercise —half an hour each day.”；在第二段中就运用了一个通俗的谚语“聪明的小孩也变傻”来强调学与玩之间要平衡的重要性。这些的灵活运用，使文章更有水平，为文章增加了不少色彩，并吸引读者的兴趣，减少此类文章的乏味性。

考点：考查对材料性作文的写作