Question

现在越来越多的人选择在网上找工作。请你就此现象以“Hunting for a Job on the Internet”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，发表自己的看法。内容包括：

1．人们宁愿在网上找工作而不愿选择传统的方法；

2．在网上找工作的原因：

(1)方便 (2)简单( 3)失败也不会难堪

3．你对在网上找工作的看法。

Answer

Hunting for a Job on the Internet

Nowadays more and more people would rather look for a job on the Internet than in the newspapers or in a job market. There are many reasons for their preference, one of which is that a job hunter can find a job conveniently without bothering to get recommendations from relatives or friends, or registration at an employment exchange. Besides, a job hunter can get a job by simply browsing among the ads online and sending resumes by e­mails. Finally, the success rate is very high, and even if one fails to find a job, it can spare him the embarrassment of being refused.

As for me, I believe that with the increasing popularity of the Internet, this new way will win favor among more and more jobless people and laid­off workers for its convenience, efficiency and high success rate.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文是个提纲作文，要点要求详尽。因为描述的是现阶段的一现象，故基本时态应定为一般现在时。又因为写作要点涉及到：现象、原因及看法，这三个主要方面，故考生应逻辑清晰、主次分明地将要点铺陈开来。

亮点说明：该范文时态使用正确，要点全面，写作思路清晰——先概括现象，再详细分析其原因，最后表明自己的观点，且详略得当。此外，该考生注意语句的衔接，“Besides”, “Finally”，“As for me,”的使用恰到好处。而用语的地道和高级句式的合理运用，例如：“would rather… than…”，“by simply browsing … and sending …”，定语从句“…one of which…”也使得文章锦上添花。